|Reviews for Valentine's Day|
| Wense chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Great story, but a little too magic fluff with the "I think I fell in love with you" that was a bit too much and a bit predictable. I also wanted to ask you: Will you make a sequel of Four times? Pretty please _ this os was really excellent!
| Critiq chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
This was absolute trash. U really dont have the knack for smut. The whole thing was rushed and boring.
| Dramione762 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
i love it!
| Crystal Dragon's blood chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Good. Draco isn't all bad
| Anonymos chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
I see you like creating sex scenes? Well, HAVE FUN! They'tr great, and very well worded and detailed. LOL. Why do you fics always make me laugh!? xD MAKE MORE.
| pujafelton chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
so cute loved it little short though but nice:)
| TheWarriorQueen chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Hahahahaha! Poor 'Mione. I know how she feels, only I got no Malfoy around... :( Good grammar and spelling... Excellent vocabulary... An all round thumbs up.
| galnkay chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Awh:) this was sweet.
| Stephanie chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
well, that was actually exactly what i was looking for. a short, sweet, dramione fluff with a bit of smut thrown in for fun. (;
you definitely hit the hail on the head. For a one-shot, I think it definitely moved at an okay-pace. And that's the beauty of a one-shot, yeah? You dont know what all has been going on in OOC Draco&Hermione's heads for all the events leading up to this particular moment. I love it.
great story, and you're an amazing author. (:
| Katie - Lyn Della Robia chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Your right. It WAS OOC. But it was still good, a little rushed maybe but still good!
| your guardian angel 4ever chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
that wuz so sweet!
| Aeris1172 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
I read the first paragraph and was immediately super frustrated. Why? Not because it's bad, but because I was writing a fic that involved Valentine's Day a long time ago and it dealt with Hermione musing on her hatred of pink & red hearts and streamers. I just spend 40 minutes looking for the notebook I had it in. Insert frustration here.
It wasn't bad, particularly. I felt that it was very sweet when Malfoy told her that he wanted to prove to her that he meant what he'd said in their dorm, but I felt like the last half of the story lacked alot of feeling and perhaps it was a bit rushed? It wasn't bad though! It could have been alot more descriptive (not necessarily with the sex, but with feelings and thoughts, etc.) Good job though, all in all!
| Ice Demon Ranger chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Cute story, though things might have moved a little too fast.
| ohhbabiix chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Heyy. :) I like how you started off the story and everything. It is interesting and all, but the ending wasn't what I expected. I feel like it was really awkward seeing them bond like that all of a sudden. : It was a good turn and everything, I guess it's just me that I can't picture Draco doing something like that all of a sudden. And Hermione didn't seem to protest much either about it as if she was alright with Draco doing all that. Despite that though, I thought the story was great. :D
| creative-writing-girl13 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Aw, that was cute and I loved it!