Reviews for Pain and Fear
Charlotte chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
OMG that is the best jisbon story i have every read you need to write more!
Divinia Serit chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Wohoo for stories! I forced myself to stay away from FFN until I finished my presentation and test. But they're done now! He. Lovely job with your descirptions, and no! It' wasn't bad at all, silly girl! I really enjoyed how you portrayed them, and I'm glad you were able to get it written!

[No, Teresa. I’m not gonna leave so you can fall apart behind closed doors. I won’t let you. I’m going to be here. Don’t hide from me. Please.”] I loved that line! Great job!
LSR-7 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Sad and tender. I think it ended well.
NorwayAussie chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
I really enjoyed it! Well written!

Rosewood of Brazil chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
this was epic!

I think a sequel would be even epic . . . er. :)
got2bekiddin chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
First of all I can't believe you thought it sucked! I loved it :D

I could so see this happening in the mentalist! At first I was a bit hesitant Lisbon being in an abusive relationship? But I completely understand it now, it was the first time it happened.

I thought the bathroom scene was so tender and sweet!

I can't tell you how much I loved it! This was my third time reading it, and so I decided to tell you how much I loved it :D Thanks for writing it! I look forward to reading more brilliance from you :D x
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Amazing story! Very intense! I really enjoyed it!
Sheethkal Shahar chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
I liked this quite a bit. Jane is so cute, and that calm anger, oh dang. I really liked how you wrote Lisbon, and I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

BFangz chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
I'm gonna add a thumbs up on this one, too. Readable, logical and in character. Very enjoyable!
Habeous Corpus chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Suck? Never! This was great! This was so well written. I must say, it was hypnotic. (no pun intended.)
rizzledindigochaser5582 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Hell no this didnt suck it was awesome!I actually really liked your writing style and you got the characters of Jane and lisbon spot on:)

Great job and did I mention this was awesome?

lynne xx
Famous4it chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Wonderfully done! Perfectly in-character and everything!I love it!
Country2776 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
it didn't suck i liked it
Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Omg. I'm like, crying. HOW can you think that it's nto icredibly amazing!

That was beautiful! You are gah! That was the BEST hurt/comfort i've ever read (except for Test of Trust, i believe) That was just absolutely amazing. I'm so glad you finished it off, and how you wrote it, so IC, Lisbon wanting to face him alone, and Jane wanting to be somewhere he could see her, and i was like holding my breath all the way through the fight and just omg! That was awesome. Gahh. *melts from hurt/comfort* I LOVED it! You should write more, because you are seriously talented!

Shadow Kissed134 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
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