|Reviews for This Is Not My Life Outtakes|
| Luv4Kristen chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
I absolutely loved this conversation between Bella and Jasper. Bella was so distraught and Jasper was able to calm her down and help her see for herself what she AND Lily needed. It was so sad for her to find out about how Lily had changed..."Were you aware that Lily won't allow anyone to call her 'baby' anymore?" "she is able to tune out conversation around her and focus on a task. Her ability to amuse herself quietly."
"I just hate feeling so different from before." ""Please. Rosalie's a bitch, and she'd be the first one to tell you that." "I've never had a big family before." I just love how you take us through such an influx of emotions with one conversation. Your writing is just incredible. Thanks for this wonderful outtake. Gwen
| Luv4Kristen chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
I love your Alice in this and her relationship with Charlie and how she told him she was ready for him to tell her what was bothering her :) Too cute. And don't get me started on Jake but its totally easy to see why Charlie is upset. Poor Charlie...distraught over the "what-if's" but if anyone can help him feel better it will be Alice.
"She's not the only family you've got. You're stuck with us Cullens for life now." Sigh...I love that about these Cullens and this story. How the families became entwined and so supportive of one another.
Thanks for this wonderful outtake. Gwen
| IsleEsme1 chapter 4 . 10/22/2010
lol.. i like charlie's POV its pretty amusing.
| IsleEsme1 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
haha alice is a firework.
| WhoKnew24 chapter 13 . 10/20/2010
Loved it. I felt so bad for her everytime she asked to see Bella and she wasn't able to. :(
Loved Em and Jasper. lol. They were pretty funny.
"But tell me the truth…You missed me the most."
I shook my head, giving him a big smile.
"What?" he said, acting all surprised and holding his heart.
I shook my head again, trying not to laugh.
"Stinky Uncle Em?"
I giggled, but I shook my head.
| WhoKnew24 chapter 12 . 10/19/2010
That little girl was such a trooper. With everything going on, she still tried to do everything she could to help Bella. :)
Loved that she kept thinking that she wanted Bella to be her mommy after they were back home. :D So cute.
| WhoKnew24 chapter 11 . 10/19/2010
Oh, Abby. Such a brave little girl, trying to help Bella in anyway she could.
It was hard to read how scared she was when Bella was unconcious and how much she hated James for hurting her. :(
| WhoKnew24 chapter 10 . 10/19/2010
Poor Charlie. :( He's a great father even if he thinks he should have done more in regards to Bella.
I can't even imagine what it would be like to have your child taken. :(
| WhoKnew24 chapter 9 . 10/19/2010
Geeze, that was heartbreaking. It's so horrible that the only way Victoria felt she could save her daughter was to take her life. :( At least Abby died in her sleep, happy and loved by her mother... so sad.
Can't believe James completely forgot about killing Victoria and actually thought she got away. I suspected the pills didn't work on Victoria when you wrote that ABBY would never wake up again but I was hoping I was wrong. :(
| WhoKnew24 chapter 8 . 10/19/2010
So sad. I hate that he did all this to her and Abby. :(
I'm guessing he threatened Abby if Victoria decided to press charges or say anything to the police, right? Like she said, he's a monster. :(
Great job. Thanks.
| WhoKnew24 chapter 7 . 10/19/2010
It's so hard reading this knowing how it will end. :(
James was as creepy as ever. *shudders* It's crazy how easily he started taking over her life, manipulating her. There's no doubt that he caused her injuries so he could get his way and have her stay home. Ugh!
I wish Victoria would have listened to her brother. :(
| lou5858 chapter 10 . 10/14/2010
You have no idea of how hard it was for me to read this chapter. I don't know if you remember, but Charlie is my favorite character of this fic. And watching him falls apart because of the kidnaping scene just ripped my heart in half.
I don't have kids, so i shouldn't have any idea of the pain he felt while watching the video, but it hurted anyway. My throat constricted and my heart ached a lot... and all i wanted to do was hug him so so tightly he'd beg me to let him go.
Oh well... you're ridiculously good on what you do - writing, if I didn't make that clear.
| Tdot TwiFic chapter 16 . 10/11/2010
I owe you sooooo many reviews. Just read everything, the story and all out takes. I love it. I have not cried so much and laughed so much in one story yet. Thank you for coming up with the idea and making James so evil and Jacob a moron. I love that. There is so much to say about all the characters and how you made them exactly like how I like them. Even though you are done it... I hope not... I want more. I would love to have a few outtakes of when Bella is pregnant and everything that Edward does to take care of her. Or welcoming the new girl from the kids home. God so much. Anyway, Thank and you.
| j967 chapter 15 . 10/10/2010
lubs papaw charlie...how absolutely funny and cute is he? :) hehehehehehehe
| j967 chapter 6 . 10/9/2010
OMG this is so funny...