|Reviews for Death of A Gossip|
| LovesRickman chapter 3 . 6/26
I am sorry to be rude but I couldn't even make it through the third chapter. Your profile says you are in your 30's but this reads like a 13 year old that is trying to hurry up and write a story before their mother finds out they have snuck online instead of cleaning their room as instructed. Far too fast paced and beyond AU. Try slowing down the pace next time. I apologise for hurting your feelings, but constructive criticism is vital if you want to be a writer.
Missy aka LovesRickman
| Lady Keiko Niwa chapter 10 . 4/22
Your writing is atrocious. You use the wrong pronouns, incorrect spelling, half worked grammar, and partcial descriptions and explination.
There is no how, what, why, or where. It's seventh grade material and your lucky if people get through your writing to leave a review.
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/3/2014
Are you going 2 write the next one ? Please do ...
| hannah.kaho chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
Where is number two? it's not on your page
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/26/2013
Please write the next one soon and answer some of the ?s that we have in the story... Love it so far ...
| theHuntress101 chapter 10 . 1/27/2013
| Princess Emarelda chapter 10 . 11/24/2012
Please writer a sequel. I absolutely love this story, but for some reason the ending is bugging me. I think you should have continued on and not ended it with Ginny getting arrested. But besides that it is a favorite of mine.
| TrAiNoFhOpE chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
I really like your story. The lines,
"But he hates children," Hermione said.
"Nonsense, he just hates the stupid ones," Dumbledore told her.
Well, we're awesome!
| Hope'sInnerMind chapter 10 . 7/12/2011
Cool! And btw its 12:23 am right right now and I just realized I've been on this site for like for almost 7 hours! LOL! Anyways nice story!
| Magenta Snape chapter 10 . 5/1/2011
HA! she kills rita!
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
What a terrific idea for a story!
| JaneA0202 chapter 10 . 1/3/2011
Only now I noticed that this story is finished. Well, the mystery part was really good and interesting (I thought that Isis trying to solve who killed Rita and interviewing those people was a bit funny since she is so young, but I didnt mind). But I still cant like the relationship between Snape and Isis. There was no build up...just imagining that I would find out that my teacher is my father and the next moment I would talk with him like he was my best friend, like he never was nasty towards Hermione and all other things, they were basically like they were together as father and daughter the whole life and Hermione Granger never existed. Im surprised that Hermione was ok with it, but to be honest, I thought that she behaved like she was some robot - what Snape told, she did it without question. And then there were some weird moments between them, also both of them, especially Snape was OOC sometimes...those things are hard to explain. I at least expected more talk between them, more personal talk, not about what she will ask those people or about studies...
| Mira SeverusSirius Black-Snape chapter 10 . 12/12/2010
I cannot find it!
| loving-reader-and-writer chapter 3 . 7/7/2010
i think that you should have kept refering to hermione as hermione. not in the dialog but in the other writeing its kinda of annoying to me the way u have it. and makes her seem like an OC.
| Blosiom chapter 10 . 5/8/2010
this was intresting