|Reviews for Reacquaintance|
| Aheartwithglass chapter 4 . 1/12/2013
| L'archangel chapter 4 . 4/21/2010
I'm looking forward on the update of your the story... :-)
| zenbon zakura chapter 4 . 3/23/2010
seto trying to spike anzu's drink?
| Mulanzu chapter 4 . 3/19/2010
Lovin it so far!
| Pharoahess016 chapter 4 . 3/11/2010
I must say your skill with descriptions and word choice is a nice refresher. I like the idea you have going too. Definitely continue!
| Kitana18 chapter 4 . 3/10/2010
| xXxtellmewhyxXx chapter 4 . 3/10/2010
M I wonder what's gonna go down? :]
| browneyes730 chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
Ah, did you have to leave it there? Hahaha. You really do have a way with words. I love the way you describe everything so nicely. Great job!I'll be waiting for the next update. :D
| rebelxxwaltz chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
I liked your analysis that Seto would consider having sore eyes from mooning over someone to be a "sad state of affairs". Very true to character, very... Kaiba.
Still enjoying this story, the tension you are building is paced well and gives just the right amount of insight into what is going on in the characters' respective minds.
I wonder how long they'll be able to keep hold of their iron self control...
| yugiohfan2005 chapter 3 . 3/6/2010
My favorite couple! Can't wait to see what happens next!
| rebelxxwaltz chapter 3 . 3/4/2010
It's a very interesting start.
I, for one, don't think your author's note is particularly necessary. Fan Fiction by nature allows for such deviations from what would be considered 'in character' behavior as the author sees fit, and as far as your story is concerned you managed to write the reasoning into the story quite adequately.
I think it's perfectly reasonable to imagine Anzu's demeanor changing in the way you have portrayed. The career she has chosen can indeed be quite cut-throat. Possibly she can learn a thing or two from her new friend Seto Kaiba? Hmm, an intriguing possibility.
Hopefully you will continue this story soon. I would be interested to see where you choose to go with this. I can envision several different roads you could go down, all of which could be quite entertaining!
| izlandangel chapter 3 . 2/25/2010
aww man i was SUPER excited and everything
why do you do this to us? haha just kidding its cool
please put the real ch3 up soon
| Sobatra chapter 3 . 2/24/2010
So I really like your story so far. The paragraphing in the first chapter made me a little skeptical, as it is only a few really long ones. I would recomend changing this because sometimes I just want to scan over large paragraphs and not really read them. I think it would greatly improve the story because it is a good chapter, just hard to pay attention to.
Also, when you put numbers into your story you have been using the acutal number (like "5" for example). Correctly, I believe that you are supposed to spell small (one to two digits) out ( like "five") instead.
But anyways it was really really good! I don't think that you needed the authors note in there because at the start of the first chapter you clearly stated that you were taking a more adult standpoint, but I guess others were confused.
So this is a really long review, but hopefully it has helped. Stay encouraged, and know that I can't wait for more!
| browneyes730 chapter 3 . 2/24/2010
Ah, you got me excited for nothing!;) Although, the author's note does clear things up. Anyways, please update soon. :D
| atemseto chapter 3 . 2/24/2010
the only confusion i have is why you havent posted the REAL chapter three. i got excited for nothing! lol but seriously good job on the story, i like it and i loved your other fic...you are very talented. -