Reviews for Immortal Child
FunnyDs1 chapter 1 . 1/6
I like it but it really confused me, How old is elf harry cause you said that Snape carries him, so its a little weird to hear that he's 12 even the 12 year old harry would have been able to keep up and he's not really that young in comparison as he was 14, wouldn't he be about 2-4 years as an elf otherwise elf ages would be really messed up being only 2 years behind humans after all
misuky7 chapter 11 . 6/19/2014
I adored this story. Harry makes such a cute elf and Blaise and Pansy are brilliant as pixies. :3
tamashiyuki chapter 11 . 1/14/2014
I like so much!
My Solitude chapter 10 . 7/25/2013
This is an awesome story!
JlovesGaara chapter 11 . 1/10/2013
I liked this story for two reasons: it was a twilight xover and you involved creature genes. This story would have been so much better if you gave perhaps a Dumbledore POV, Voldie POV, and you had more actions and thoughts to go along with your dialogue. Keep up the good work, good luck with future writing.
Leila chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Gotta say there is a lot of crossing arms in the chapter and maybe a bit too much direct speech but i really like the plot
Penny is wise chapter 11 . 8/31/2011
Awesome story.
Awesomely Unperfect 22 chapter 11 . 4/3/2011
Your stories are amazing. I look forward to your updates.
moonprincess97524 chapter 11 . 12/13/2010
I love this story.
darkplayer35 chapter 11 . 8/1/2010
Very interesting story. If Harry was a full blooded elf wouldnt he grow to full maturity (otherwise how would there be other elves... ie reproduction)
fifespice chapter 10 . 7/30/2010
ooh so harrys a full elf and esmes baby cute im curouis who the elder elf was though
fifespice chapter 9 . 7/30/2010
ooh interesting so im guessing they fell ill as theire mortality or whatever leaves them then
fifespice chapter 8 . 7/30/2010
so harrys draco cousin sweet am curious who the other elf is though and poor kid having to go to school and pretend to be 10 though
fifespice chapter 7 . 7/30/2010
interesting so where exactly did they end up and who was the other elf hmm
Taeniaea chapter 10 . 7/21/2010
cool story
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