Reviews for Immortal Child
Mashrose chapter 1 . 12/4/2017
This isn't Harry's POV. This is third person limited. Harry's POV would use words like I and me, not he.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/13/2017
The story heads into one direction too fast. Include the fact it also contains far too many cliches and constant chatter that doesn't end and gets annoying.
Shadowdog11 chapter 4 . 4/13/2017
I'm all sorts of back and forth on this. I want to read more, but you've made Harry so young in his actions to match his visible age... it's rather off-putting.
h0neybunny16 chapter 1 . 10/10/2015
this is really good I hope you update soon
Fantasywings7 chapter 10 . 7/11/2015
Interesting story, with quite a unique twist! I agree with you, I also like AU stories, something new and different... and this story was a very refreshing read in that regard... really sweet story! Harry is so cute as an elf, I will look out for the sequel.
Fantasywings7 chapter 9 . 7/11/2015
That was powerful! Should it not be "immortal curse"?
Fantasywings7 chapter 8 . 7/11/2015
That was an unexpected twist, Lily and Narcissa being sisters... and Harry a Black. I bet the adult elf in the Woods was Sirius ( but if so, it's strange that harry did not recognize him... hmm), So, Harry was charmed, did not expect that either... interesting with the effects ( and non effects9 of the killing curse
Fantasywings7 chapter 7 . 7/11/2015
So, an adult elf shows up, interesting... I miss the Cullens a bit in this, they are not involved much, but, great story!
Fantasywings7 chapter 6 . 7/11/2015
Now it is getting really complicated... glad if Dumbledore is light, though.
Fantasywings7 chapter 5 . 7/11/2015
So, Ron is the spy for the light, good that he is back with his friends. I still wonder about what the , and the Veela society will do about all this... I am also thinking about Fleur, who is part Veela in Canon, and Bill's girlfriend/wife, will she b involved? Still thnks Harry should go to an elf-school, and not booger school, and the Cullens need to learn more about elfs, and get to know Harry better.
Fantasywings7 chapter 4 . 7/11/2015
So, Harry gets to go to a " ... hmmm... surely there must be some kind of elf-community, where Harry could learn about being an elf and their society? And there must be a magical Community in the U.S? However, sweet chapter!
Fantasywings7 chapter 2 . 7/11/2015
Very interesting so far, Harry is so cute as an elf! I am glad he finally has a family who cares about him, and that he at least have some of his friends left, and Draco too, he fits as a Veela... interesting twist, love that Sev is on the so-called light side
FunnyDs1 chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
I like it but it really confused me, How old is elf harry cause you said that Snape carries him, so its a little weird to hear that he's 12 even the 12 year old harry would have been able to keep up and he's not really that young in comparison as he was 14, wouldn't he be about 2-4 years as an elf otherwise elf ages would be really messed up being only 2 years behind humans after all
misuky7 chapter 11 . 6/19/2014
I adored this story. Harry makes such a cute elf and Blaise and Pansy are brilliant as pixies. :3
tamashiyuki chapter 11 . 1/14/2014
I like so much!
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