Reviews for Turbulence
yurixoxo chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Aw the last scene was really really cute!
I-chart chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
I guess this will have to hold me over till the next chanper but please don't make me wait to long. As you are addicted to our comments we are addicted to your story of Jace and we Clary too. The songs are perfict in every way for this setting.
Neoleyjean chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Oh my goodness hurry and update this story is so pure and sweet and of course fluffy! I love it please write more! I beg.
Jace's lover chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Aw. Tht chp was cute..
icestarlight chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Ha! Love it,very nicely done. It's nice to see Clary having fun with Isabelle. Love the ending it was sweet, a slow connection between Jace and Clary, your right con see that there is a slow crush going between the, even if they both deny it. Over all very nice done chapter :) I didn't see any mistakes either! So I think your good for spelling and grammar. Anyways can't wait to see what you have plan next for those two.!

Awesome work :P
burning.x.impossibly.x.bright chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
Haha oh Eric's band...Simon isn't a member in this haha, lucky guy he's definitely not missing out :P haha

I love how intensely Simon stares at Izzy, it's hilarious, and he's so stoked to be around her lol like he won the lottery or something, or a kid in a toy store! :P

Oh Jace :) He totally abandoned those two chicks just to be near Clary...if that isn't a sign that a guy likes you I dunno what is :P and Simon was so pissed at Jace even being near Clary...MAGNUS! YAY! :D

Izzy and Jace are definitely helping Clary move on with her life, and Simon's been helping for how long but obviously it wasn't something only he could help her overcome...you can already notice changes in her, she's not preoccupied with the fact that Jonathan isn't there and she isn't feeling guilty about living her own life.

Awe Jace playing guitar! EEK! I love how Clary just sat outside the door to listen, I wonder if she'll ever listen to him play when he actually knows she is...if she does listen to him in the same room while he knows it will definitely be a turning point in their relationship, the shared grief and all that, it's kinda an aphrodesiac ;) haha

And "Night, Pippi" so cute! :D

Dang that friend zone, Clary's denial, Simon's jealousy, and all the other stuff that are in their way...oh well no matter what, they'll always have the soccer field, nobody else seems to go there in the mornings, and Jace's playing too :) They're slowly but surely developing a base for a future relationship and they don't even see it ;) silly of them really, but they'll see..it'll be obvious soon enough, and if not I'm sure Simon will yell at Clary or something and she'll be all hey you're right haha

Awesome job! Can't wait to read some more! :D
Treacherous Darkness chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
This was such an adorable chapter. I love the situations these people get in to, it's hilarious. Oh, and I like how it's an AH fic, but you still incorporate the many various characters.
BlondeHairBlueEyes14 chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
LOVE IITT! Ur an amazing writer! I love the funn Clary! :)
kitotterkat chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
LOVE THIS! :) I seriously love all of your work ... I can't wait for more!
sillysac chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
So I was reading this chapter and I got to the point that Clary had fallen asleep and I realised I was late for school!

Bah! So I rushed out, got to school, and found out too soon after that our group project had been cancelledd. It was the most annoying thing ever.

But I just finished it and I loved it. Tik Tok is one of my fav songs right now. I listened to it on the way to school.

Yup, there was fluff, just not a ton of it. I get it. They shouldn't be falling all ove reach other so fast. It would seem weird, I think.

You poor thing. After this chapter people are going to be hounding you for more. Even I don't want to wait, but I will.

Oh, tell your husband he's crazy to think you're not funny. :)
Jace'n'FangLover chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
naw! thas so cute! i love jace with clary! there r a perfect couple! right more! plz! and i wanna kno wat happened to jaces! so next chapter!
Sighned-Anonymous chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
This was great; they are so cute!

LB
sunkissedchris chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
I loved it! Update soon please.
Jaaace.Claaary chapter 6 . 3/1/2010
I loved it when izzy & clary sang tik tok, theyre becoming good friends :)

but i really really really loved when clary listened to jace play :) Also, i like how you're taking it slow with them and not making them fall for each other rightt away. KEEP GOING ! :D
Jace's lover chapter 5 . 2/28/2010
I love ur writing so much. Pleze post the next one soon. U write as good as Cassandra herself.:) breakeven by the script is a song u might want to use 4one of ur next chapters:D
2,528 | « Prev Page 1 .. 149 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 .. Last Next »