|Reviews for Everything Else is Nothing|
| YuriPrince chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
I lOve yuki. She was my fav character the moment I saw her, no joke. The way you wrote her POV was awesome.
There must be an error. I was never meant to be cute.
Hahaha _ funny
| May chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
hello the way you wrote yuki was amazing. she is my fav charator. i love how she secretly wannts it mmmmm
| panpanpeppermint chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
I love how Haruhi is kind and gentle here, they're having sex for the first time so it's understandable.
LMAO, female ejaculation. Yuki's scientific approach fit perfectly. Great femslash.
| Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Well, well, soldier...
Ok, so I'm kinda new in this section, give the fact I've NEVAR watched TMoHS in my LIFE. All I know 'bout it is from anime reviews on different websites. LOL
But still! An AW3SOME! fic is an AW3SOME! fic, and a reviewe is a review. LMAO
This was AW3SOME!
ROFL at Yuki's uber scientific approach to everything. ROFL I'll admit I did a double take when I read the scientific term for "female ejaculation". I was like...O.o XD Kudos for that.
Oh yeah, and O at Haruhi making Yuki confused. O LOEV works in mysterious ways! ;D
So, Helluva job here, marine!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
| Lengasm chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Lol that was a great read! I swear I was having an orgasm just reading O.O
| kaizer20 chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
SO HOT LESBIAN SEX!
| oxytocin chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
I'm not that familiar with TMoHS, but I liked it, so that's all that counts! :D lol
I don't know, am I actually supposed to give constructive criticism here? lmao Well, I just read your tweet, so I will.
Um, the random part about female ejaculation and how you put in the actual name for discharge really cracked me up, I don't know if that was the intention. lol Otherwise, obviously you weren't going to get hot and sweaty sex with Yuki, so I think you did a good job of making it erotic without like, really going over the top. And I agree with the one other person that Haruhi would be tender in these situation, especially since she liked Yuki. And, albeit with limited knowledge, I thought you did Yuki's perspective really well, because love is the one emotion that makes even unemotional people...emotional! :D
So yes, I very much liked it. I would like to read more fic from you, smut or no. :D
And I'll work my way through the K-ON one too, just not tonight. :)
So there you go. ~
| RoadMart chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Very nicely written, and I find Haruhi's gentleness refreshing and surprisingly in character. Yuki as well! Ah, Yuki...Wonderfulness...
This fic is justice. Thank you for being awesome and making my day. ;D
| Colin chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
I dunno. Well written, but Haruhi seems unusually gentle, and I guess I'm just naturally averse to first person narration by Yuki.
Overall, very good.