|Reviews for Moonlit Rendezvous and Dirty Secrets|
| Evidence Murderer chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
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| REMEMBERMRSLCULLEN4EVER chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
I SEE THAT IT IS NOT COMPLETE...I WOULD LOVE TO SEE WHERE EDWARD AND JASPER GO FROM HERE.
EDWARD DID DROP HIS RESUME...THAT HAD ALL THE INFORMATION JASPER WOULD NEED TO TRACK HIM DOWN.
SO MANY POSSIBILITIES...
I WILL PUT THIS STORY ON ALERT AND HOPE YOU DECIDE TO CONTINUE,
| Grizzo chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Hey this wss a great story. I see you wrote this a year ago, and was wondering if you were continuing? Doesn't have a complete on it. Like to see hpw truely messed up Jasper is and if Edward gets his crap together.
| Robpfan chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
hey there... great story...
know it's a fairly old one, but you should consider doing a second chapter from JPOV... so many things left unanswered...
the resume with his address fell to the office floor... Alice could be his beard... he could run after Edward... or Alice could... would make a good different side to what we already know...
love the story, and whatever you write...
| sasharose11 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
OMG, that was crazy. Those 2 were so vera vera hot. I'm hoping that you add more and Jasper redeems himself. There was obviously a strong connection. If not, I'll work it out and give them a HEA myself ;-)
| laverett chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
love this too... you probably get tired of me begging for more more more:)
| Nisa Cullen chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
FML indeed! Poor Edward but great story!
| PockyPand4 chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
| featherme chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
That sucks about Jasper! I gotta tell you though, he was H.O.T. From the very beginning with the way you described him and then the way he talked to Edward, Whew! He is yummy.
| SubtlePen chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
oh jeez bb - yeah. i think i wanted e and j to end up together so bad, the funny got swallowed up by sad. love the emmett banter, backdoor spectacular, wrap your tool, fuck long and prosper... and oh yeah - Lucas and Travis? **dies** um yeah. that's good spank bank-age, right there.
idk bb. i heart you either way, and enjoyed it even if id didn't come across as humor. i want another chapter, where j redeems himself and ends up with e. JS.
| kirifox chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Good story! Edward hasn't seen the last of Jasper...he dropped his resume, which of course contains his name and address and phone number, on the floor when he was leaving. Intentional...or just plain dumb?
I see that this is not marked completed. Does that mean that we will be seeing more of your awesome writing in another chapter of Dirty Secrets?
| slowpoke15hi5 chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Please continue! I so so so want to know why he cheated on Alice. Is he gay or bi? Please continue... I must know... the suspense is going to kill me...
| lexiecullen17 chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
oh...wow. sad sad times for everyone. and, yes, i'm impressed that you managed to turn that prompt into slash, haha. very, very impressed :)
| Britt01 chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
Great story! It felt believable, and I loved how the FML fit in. Hot, too!
| evenflo78 chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Oh man you really did a wonderful job. Great story. Good luck sweets