Reviews for A Partial Old Friend |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love the part about Mrs. Hodges. Well done, gave me a good laugh. Thank you for that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I too am opposed to relationships between adults and minors, but you love who you love and if it isn't "acted" upon... Mr. Knightly is too gentle a soul to ever do anything that would hurt " his Emma " and he knew she hasn't ready. She needed more time to figure out who she is and experience life before she knew what she wanted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love how you put "partial old friend" at the end of each chapter. Absolutely love how you put her calling him George in the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you always put the bit about "partial old friend" at the end. Very nice touch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She knows how to set her pa pa off. LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I believe you could have put more parts on one page, just labeled them. It would've been easier. Good story, though. |
![]() ![]() Oh I’m so disappointed this has been left incomplete! You’re such a fantastic writer and this story really maintained the essence of the characters we all know and love! Flowed very well despite being Drabbles, but loved how they work as stand alones too. Kudos to you :) |
![]() ![]() Aww I loved seeing knightley’s POV in this chapter! It made me so sad for him and almost envious of Emma to have such a “partial old friend” ;) |
![]() ![]() I love your story. Each chapter is like eating a bar of chocolate. Warm and indulgent and puts a smile on my face every time - thank you! I hope you continue writing more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He was a partial old friend, Indeed. And that's exactly why a compliment coming from his is precious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so playful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A surge of tenderness rushed through him for his little Emma... AWWWW... |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like they say, Mr. Knightley is always right |