|Reviews for Marauders:Exposed|
| TheNorwegianAuthor chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Thank you - VERY MUCH - for not giving me a Peter picture in my head! THAT would be D-I-S-C-U-S-T-I-N-G!
| Shannon chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Okay, I like this idea, but it needs a bit of work.
To make it easier to read you should space out the writing a bit.
Also, please don't (A/N, this is really annoying!) put authors notes in the middle of your story, or sentences. It makes it hard to read.
Other than that, this was quite funny (:
| 5redroses chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
Your story would be easier on the eyes if you put spaces between the lines. I know you were going for comedy, but I personally found the author notes a bit disruptive and annoying. Sorry if the review sounds a bit harsh, I'm not trying to be nasty, just giving you some pointers.
| Banana chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
what the heck..! i love you're convo.'s with them! your stories are hilarious!
| Greensl33ves chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Other than losing my eyebrows somewhere around my hairline, I quite enjoyed this fic. Pure and utter nonsense, of course, but the world could use some more of that. :D
| Lacrymose chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
You were riught. This doesn't make any sense. Man I love crazy.
| School-of-Rock101 chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
that was so funny i was laughing so hard i think that the funniest part was "Yeah. She insisted that all three of us take a shower."
"Ew, Remus, no!"
"Whew, that's good," Remus sighed and i love the thing with the socks i don't know how you came uo with that but it is hilarious
| quotefreak97 chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
that was a little...um... weird. but keep writing
| la harlequin chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
hahahaha... omg hilarious! What have you got against Sirius? Sirius is awesome!
| THE Empress of Insanity chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
Ok, I LOVED this... *clicks favorites* _
| SubtleKnife047 chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
...uhm...I have no clue what just hit me...way too many author's notes, and it was a big jumbled mess of confusion.
| brandi chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
oh! would LOVE to be a fly on the wall then:)loved the story!way too funny
| forestofgreenjello chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
great! i cant wait to read the sequel!
"Oh, that's good," James said, "I was begining to be disturbed by the growing level of flitty socks."
**laughs so hard she cant breathe and is forced to end the review**
| pistacionut chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
I am trying to decide if you are a Genuis or Psycopath, im not sure, but you're bloody funny anyway, lol stories are great
| Tabitha78 chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
*ha!* :-) Totally silly, but still made me laugh!
Enjoyed it, even if some of it didn't quite make sense. :-)