|Reviews for First Date|
| The Very Last Valkyrie chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
My absolute soulmate - who can tell what I'm thinking, who likes everything that I like, who knows me back to front - is gay, so I kind of get where you're coming from. Though I never really cared about him that way, it still sucked when I realised we could never EVER be together.
I loved this - so heartfelt and real.
| msashlyjudd8 chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
wow that would be embarrassing. This story was really sweet, I'm glad Edward found her freaking out and not Jasper.
| nonies5 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Been there, donr that! Great story though.
| Rosmarina chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Ah, poor Allie. I'm so glad Edward was such a nice guy to her. :)
| eli-dunbigboot chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
FML indeed! ;) Excellent!
| arden8283 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
I loved the lines, "The strange guy pulled me away from Jasper and into another hug. What was with these guys and hugging? Was it some new way of greeting people that allowed you to cop a feel at the same time?" Poor, poor Alice - to find out your dream guy is totally unattainable and then have his bf give you a peptalk...yikes! Not what I was expecting though! Great job!
| Raven Jadewolfe chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
poor Alice lol good luck!
| Palikane87 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Wow, that took me by surprise. I'd hate to be Alice in that moment. Awesome story by the way. One of my favorite FML one-shots I've read so far.