Reviews for Red Dawn
minniemousemom chapter 28 . 1/12/2014
Great one!
kitanalao chapter 10 . 12/6/2013
and kiri with kisame waw... that also surprising... and now kisame lost his authority... huft... that's worrisome. nice chapter... sadly i have to stop reading due to work. but i'll be back when i had a time.. so see you...
kitanalao chapter 9 . 12/6/2013
hahaha... i really love when sakura force sasuke to let her out of his room. haha... i laughed my self when i picturing it. and i wonder the one who following naruto and the other...
kitanalao chapter 8 . 12/6/2013
aww... that was soo cute. i never though you will made alex as deidara's mate... and to be honest. i am suprise when i read this... but i like it...
kitanalao chapter 7 . 12/6/2013
hmm... i wonder why orochimaru had interesting to sakura... it's because he like her? please tell me i am wrong... i know he look young in manga and anime... but i couldn't imagine he is in love with sakura... not one bit. and i wonder if the half breed in the last part. was kiri?
kitanalao chapter 6 . 12/6/2013
waw... soo much event soo far. and i like how sakura act toward sasuke. and also nice fantasy... because this chapter has detail event and progressing. and yeah i am back.. i know it's been a while since my last review in chapter 5 right? well... continue reading...
Yungsun chapter 28 . 11/3/2013
Good chapter
Gigubowbow chapter 12 . 9/28/2013
wait, do the humans she Kyouran as a human?
Guest chapter 28 . 9/19/2013
i was actually kinda looking forward to the lemon / mosty because i wanted to read how the mating ritual is completed, and why they need to consummate to complete it...i dont suppose theres another place where u can post it? and its ABOUT TIME that kakashi finally realize whats in front of him! gosh
Guest chapter 28 . 9/13/2013
Will you be putting all the lemon scenes of this story in a different website? Can't wait for next chapter and sad that it is almost ending
dark shadow400 chapter 28 . 9/12/2013
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one update soon
PineapplexFudge Angel chapter 27 . 8/28/2013
finally! its about time kakashi realizes that he loves kyouran, too bad it took her impending death for him to realize smh. david is a retard for trying to reject elise, and who is trying to save kyouran? cant wait to read the next chapter! and i feel so sorry for shisui :'(
minniemousemom chapter 27 . 8/21/2013
Wow great one very good
mdtiger chapter 27 . 8/18/2013
How can Kakashi accept her does he have to say it aloud he loves her for the bond to work? I see Kakashi's relationship as well as cat and mouse. She can never leave when she wants to. I do think she will not believe his love. Kyouran loves him but because of the hatred that he has and then loving her, she might not think its a sincere love but a forced one. That he loves her because of the bond that is it. Maya was in the crowd? I think maybe it was Elise that got hurt. Im going to assume who helped Kyouran was the snow leopard. Oooh maybe we will see a jealous Kakashi for that. Cant wait for next chapter.
Prescripto13 chapter 27 . 8/17/2013
This has been a good read!
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