|Reviews for The Wilting Rose|
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/30/2013
Maybe it was for the best. Your writing isn't that bad, it's just how you portrayed Draco. He shouldn't be a bottom, to me, that is wrong because he is so not feminine, neither is Harry but in height, not the movies but the books, Harry is short and short men, should not be on top. I just despise Harry being on Top. It p*sses me off that there is just so many Top Harry stories. I HATE THEM. There should be more Top Draco stories. Still not a bad story, except for Draco's weak character.
| LOL chapter 11 . 12/15/2013
Girl you lost Draco the moment you made him this pathetic and made him a bottom. If you don't wanna write bottom Harry I suggest you realize you can write them both as tops and bottoms. Just make them alternate. Contrary to popular belief the seme/uke aka top/bottom thing does not happen ALL the time (if ever) with gay or lesbian couples in real life outside of porn. Even bleeding straight couples don't fall into this routine. Why do you think so many sex positions were invented and are so heavily practiced? No-body wants to be the b-i-t-c-h all the time.
| SmoothCriminalVictim chapter 16 . 11/13/2013
Awe :( I was really exited about the next chapter...
| HARD-YAOI-RP chapter 16 . 11/9/2013
I don't know. the story is awesome as it is. perhaps getting draco's parents in this will do?
| foreverDraco101 chapter 16 . 7/8/2013
No come back please , I love thus story and I dont find anything wrong with it, I really hope you get inspired to continue because this was AMAZING , please don't abandon it completely , please come back
| TheUsualCrime chapter 11 . 6/10/2012
Your story really isn't that bad in terms of characterization - but I'm ducking out early anyway because I'm sick to death of the countless author rants on The Wrongness of BottomHarry. If you haven't grown out of the brat schtick yet, then I have a huge round of applause for your decision to stop writing, because I'm convinced no one so childish ought to be handling fanfic. People have a lot of differing opinions on the Internet, it's not smart to assume all your readers hate BHarry as much as you do, just because they like BDraco enough to read this story. And someone who "sees Draco as a bit of a girl" herself has no business throwing stones at ANYONE for writing Femme!Harry, in case you missed the part where Draco's a guy as well. Finally, Harry being shorter than Draco isn't from movie!canon, it's DH book!canon - your own fic is instantly more un-canon than the BHarry stories you're leveling, just by virtue of making him the taller one here. So enough; hypocrisy never makes anyone look good.
| Sable Bishop chapter 16 . 12/11/2011
. you could have just end the fic with harry kick blaises' ass or blaise turning on them and let voldemort into teh school and have them getting their arse kicked or something!
| Sable Bishop chapter 14 . 12/11/2011
oh god x.x''
| Sable Bishop chapter 11 . 12/11/2011
that was a low move of Harry...beating an enemy while he's down.
ah well, all's fair in love and war.
| Sable Bishop chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
i wouldn't be surprised if harry was turned on at the sight of blaise kissing the hell out of malfoy
| Sable Bishop chapter 2 . 12/11/2011
| StephanieHatesUtoo chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Oh! It's sad that you won't be continuing the story, I liked it very much.
| Hi chapter 10 . 10/18/2011
I totally agree with the top/bottom roles that you said,but every body else sadly don't think so.
| Hi chapter 7 . 10/18/2011
I agree with you.
| Hi chapter 3 . 10/17/2011
I read this story a while back and was disappointed to find it abandoned. Let me tell you, I almost had a heart attack (of happiness) when I saw the recent update. Your the one who got me hooked on sub Draco and mean Blaise.
PS: I love you. :D (crazy smile)