Reviews for Gethsemane
Screen chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
"W-why must I die?" I don't think that Jesus was that naive to not no the purpose of his dieing. Other then that I think it was an ok portraylal.
TrenchcoatsAreSexy chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Wonderfully written, great imagery - good job!
Amandah Leigh chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
I love the way you write. Your descriptive ability and vocabulary are highly impressive. Excellent fix!

AL
Insanemistosingsmore chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Now, I really admire you for taking on this type of fic. My only question is...if this is based on the musical...wasn't Ted Neely (and whoever played him in the 2000 version) a tenor?

Beautiful imagery in the beginning...but perhaps a bit too much. Yes, you have a gift for describing things...but if you go overboard with it, some might just loose interest in the fic.
Australian Surmise chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
W...o...w

This is an extremely powerful piece of writing.

Your technique with words is exceptional.

I really enjoyed the metaphors you used, especially in regards to blood. You really created wonderful imagery in my mind.

And I don't have any criticism...I think that's a first for me. Great job.

Write more. Explore outside of your Zelda comfort zone. ;)

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Sydney