Reviews for The More Things Change
Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 4/9/2016
That was an interesting prompt you certainly were up to the challenge. Great job, very sweet tender and poignant. However, sometimes I just want to smack my boys for being so stubborn. More would be nice like Esme and Carlisle discovering them together the next morning and welcoming Jasper to the family because they are perceptive and recognized the boys' feelings for each other. And also realized theirs was a forever love. OK so I imagined the "rest of the story" myself. Never mind. Lol
Evidence Murderer chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Fiction MA, adult content with explicit sexual or violent situations, is not allowed on FFn. Please take down "The More Things Change" and repost on another site. (If you don't know where to post it, AdultFanFiction and Archive Of Our Own both allow these types of works.)
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
Fantastic story
OcSickGirl chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Damn...that heartbreaking and hot at the same time. Thanks for sharing!
MoCullen chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
This would be a great one to continue...
YetAnotherFan2010 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
really nice:) thanks for writing!
AnnaLund chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
brilliant. new love, and discovery of self. sweet and confusing. life. and understanding that love is love. beautiful.

thank you for writing.

Mych0ice chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Such a sweet friendship. I would love to know where the love story goes from here! I love the way the characters had to come full circle.

Well written and entertaining!
momkuttler chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Third time reading this sweet story. One of my most favorite lines in fanfiction:

"Edward," he breathed, and I felt it and tasted it. "Look at me, Edward."

"Why?" I whispered, still safe behind my eyelids.

"Because I want you to know who's kissing you."

Just beautiful!

Fliberty chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I like this a lot.

They are such sweet boys but both insecure enough to push the other away and ruin their friendship.

I'd love to know what happens next and how they adjust to everything that happened last night. I'm guessing Jasper's Dad wouldn't be supportive.
missysaaa.crystal chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Loved it! And they are both whores! Gotta love Edward *dreamy face*

llegsp chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Please!Please! Pleeeeeease update! or continue this story, it's amazing!
Lisa-FanFicCrazy chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Is it weird I thought this was one of the sweetest stories ever? Thanks...
laura lou who chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Wow, that really happened to you? Fuck!

This was a great story! Super hot ending. So loving like all your writing is.
mspacman1 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Great one-shot!
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