Reviews for Heartache
Ya boi chapter 1 . 11/11/2018
Very nice
Could have gone longer
wintercanary101 chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
This is very nicely done! Even when listening to music that fits with this story, it still brought me to tears. Keep it up!
kju chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Aaah oh my god, that was really cute uwu You should do some more of these.
SuperGenX chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
And then Desmond kills her for being a Templar. D
No, but really, this is pretty good. I enjoyed it.
ad chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
it was good lol
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Hey. I love this story. Personally, I love the DesLucy love thing. You should totally write a M sequel to this. I would read it.
Assassin chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Thts the awesomest idk if thts a word but tht fan fic was the best you should continue a little bit more
Assassin chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Thts the awesomest idk if thts a word but tht fan fic was the best you should continue a little bit more
mornir-brightflame chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Aw, that was sweet, but it could probably do with some more thorough editing..
Assassin Aisha chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
AWWWWWWWWWW! I JUST HAD 2 REVIEW SOMETHIN AS CUTE AS THIS!
Yama chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
So cute.

Yes, it is a serious shame there is such a lack of Desmond/Lucy stuff. u_u
WouldDeleteIfWasAnOption chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Sappy like a maple tree? Yes. Wonderful? Definitely.

Right on, man!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Wow, what a sweet ff story :D I loved it, please write more D&L stories. It's sad to see that there aren't many Lucy / Desmond ones out there :(
Falcon212 chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
aw thats so sweet... i completly loved it MAKE MORE PLEASE!
lord-cairos chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
very good. wish there was more like chapter length. I do agree that there should be more Desmond X Lucy stories. Keep up the good work
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