I like how you mentioned Kai Leng here in this chapter, gives us a hint of what he's capable of and who he is. Because a lot of people's complaint is that Kai Leng just showed up out of nowhere with no backstory or anything.

I kept seeing the phrase "high ground" and I couldn't help but think, someone is gonna make an Obi-Wan Joke. Didn't happen.

If I had a nickel for every time I read a Mass effect fanfic where the Thressure Maw ate Grunt, I'd have two nickels. It's not a lot but still weird that it's happened twice.

this story was really good.
was reading it on ao3 and found it here.
the choice to put the dlc in the story was great

Even after playing the games and knowing how the “good” ending ends, you still manage to induce a slither of anxiety at knowing that not all the loyalty missions are done. It speaks of your skills as a writer.

If I had to adapt the ME series into a show, I would use this more or less unchanged for the ME2 part. Perfect interpretation of the characters and translation of the game into story format.

Have to say that no often i can say that a fiction was great but this masterpiece just is something you habe to read if you like mass effect

If only the litany of family problems came up after all the other crew members were recruited. Alongside their family problems.

Great story, probably the best fanfic I've read so far, but god the girl power shit is so annoying.

Amazing read so far chief. Sad to see you stopped updating your other stories but this one will always be a gem. Thanks for doing this, have a good one!

I like what this seems to be building towards. It always felt wrong that Shepard and co would just leave the Normandy for no reason if you'd already finished all of the loyalty missions ahead of time.

I wonder about that last line actually. Did the Normandy SR-2 cost more than four billion credits?

Ah the first kiss.

Ah sexism, what a wonderful addition to any story. If you're here for beta males getting walked over and, in some cases, even physically abused, then this is the story for you!

I just noticed you misspelled Noveria at the end here