Reviews for Nicoles Back
Cambre chapter 3 . 6/28/2014
Ooh I wonder what's Gonna happen?
Cambre chapter 2 . 6/28/2014
I love your book so far
GinaXOXO333 chapter 5 . 4/25/2010
schillingklaus chapter 5 . 3/31/2010
Hm ... I'm no longer the only one who uses footnotes, it seems.

Spider Herman ... Chase was there in Quarantine, when Quinn called the spider by name. But he has probably forgotten about it.

The thing with Michael hugging a boy in his sleep, and calling him Lisa, was cool.

Lola should have screamed, and Nicole even worse.

It should have been mentioned that it was a big yet fairly harmless bird spider.

A latrodectus mactans (black widow) would have been a hell of a danger.

Chase is more afraid of raccoons. Fortunately Quinn hasn't yet had any.
Boris Yeltsin chapter 5 . 3/30/2010
LOL, Chase is afraid of spiders.
schillingklaus chapter 4 . 3/28/2010
I thought that Michael would now rather sleep in Lisa's room ...
Boris Yeltsin chapter 3 . 2/23/2010
Your formatting needs a lot of work, and your spelling's a little off.
Boris Yeltsin chapter 2 . 2/18/2010
LOL with Chase and Michael complaining about the weight of their stuff.
Boris Yeltsin chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Nice, but your formatting needs some work.

Do you take requests for stories?