Reviews for Languid
CRMediaGal chapter 20 . 10/20/2014
Such a sweet story! I enjoyed it immensely. My only beef is that I felt like Severus got off far too easy. He was horribly, viciously cruel to her when he dismissed her as he did. I under that he's quite damaged, but I wish there would have been a bit more fighting on his part to earn Hermione back. Other than that, it was a wonderful read!
ExAmoreDolorem chapter 20 . 11/2/2012
This is such a wonderful, brilliant story. I don't "love" it, but I'm so in love with it. Really, I am amazed. I want to read more, please!
Too-lazy-to-sign-in chapter 20 . 5/16/2011
I loved this story. This is my second time reading it, and I have to say it made my top ten favorite list. Keep up the good writing!

Oceanna chapter 20 . 2/12/2011
That was beautiful. So succint, so simple, but so... true. Very poetic, too, and flowing quickly - but not too much, just enough to avoid what was unecessary.

It felt right, all along, their loneliness, the way they met, his hesitations (and that was tricky, because it could have been just another cliché), the end...

Thanks for writing that !
Darque Hart chapter 18 . 10/13/2010
Dear anne-writes - This story is beautiful and I love it and wish it could go on and on ... truly, it is fabulous. [yes, there's a 'but'.]

"...she looked up at him from red-rimmed blue eyes." Hermione does not have blue eyes. Unless you meant 'blue' as in unhappy, but it still reads as her having blue-colored eyes and she doesn't.
magnific chapter 20 . 7/7/2010
i'd normally say i'd grown apathetic to the cliche of snape pushing hermione away but your language is so poetic and style so succint that i couldn't help loving this piece. wonderfully done. thanks for sharing it with us :)
Alexa1993 chapter 20 . 6/29/2010
Lolita chapter 20 . 6/23/2010
It was sweet and sexy. Very poetic & beautiful!
Azhmyr Athena Le-Fay chapter 13 . 5/8/2010
love it
Loyd1957 chapter 20 . 3/12/2010
Nicely done. At first I thought things were flying too fast. She was stating he was lonely, she was lonely, asking to lunch so fast, but then it seemed to flow perfectly. I hate to see sad people and they just needed each other.
Velvet Storm chapter 20 . 3/12/2010
*applauds* I do like happy endings! Nice job!
Einsam chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Loved it! Fantastic premise, beautifully written, and love the lyrics too, although the actual song leaves a lot to be desired :P Bravo!
LoveHGSS chapter 20 . 3/11/2010
Oh my goodness, this was so sweet, and so good. Very nicely done, and I utterly love how you have the chapters short but powerful. Great job! I loved this!
Velvet Storm chapter 18 . 3/11/2010
Fabulous! I loved it! Gosh...he's not going to do that again any time soon, is he?
Velvet Storm chapter 16 . 3/11/2010
Oh good...he's coming around! Go to her, Severus! Go!
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