Great chapter! Thank you!

Yay for the super extra long chapter. I really like what you've done with the story so far. I can see the Bloody Skies inspiration and since I love that story I can definitely see this story being one of my favorites.

awesome story...I hope Harry gets with Vaan and gets to live a long time..too bad remus couldn't get his butt kicked by Sirus. update soon

This chapter is so sad... well the end of the chapter. I hope you can save Harry and make him kill Dumbledork and the flaming chicken. How Fawnk cant stay with Dumbledork after what he did to Harry

Good work.

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I like it so far and I find Harry hilarious -

Ehh don't know what else to say. But I hope you have fun writing it.

I like a lot this chapter ! I didn't understand why harry has tree years and after that will be dead .

I like a lot the professor . Will haryy live ? ( i think you can make this story in romance and angst or hurt comfort . Will harry be with porfessor or student ? I think that harry can said that he is harry potter at the headmaster because if he can be saved by him , why not ?

But i think that harry is a liitle too much (he seems to be a too powerful young man) .

i wait with impatience the next chapter !

Interesting story! I look forward to seeing how it turns out. But I do hope he finds a way to repair his bonds. Oh, and and page breaks are a little distracting, but otherwise fine.

Theres a few spelling errors. The one that I rember the most is where the Seer lady is telling him you have no friends at the school. You have her saying you ahve. Just so you know and there was one other place where it says if instead of of. Lol, that's all really. Wow, this was a very long chapter. Good though. So I hope you update when you can!

good story

Totally kick ass first chapter. I'm so happy you're doing a Harry/OMC. There aren't enough of those out there. I loved the whole idea with the ritual and the founders and pretty much everything else. I'm so glad you're letting Harry keep his eye-color. I hate when people change it. As for his hair...well def not blond cause that's been done but def something dark. Maybe keep it black and put in red highlights (but like natural hair-color red not red-red if that makes sense lol). Btw, out of curiosity, will Harry be the bottom in the relationship? (please say yes!) lol. Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter!

No glasses would be cool. Well I like this and can't wait for the next update, it's a good start. Good name to!

Love your story. You should make Harry's hair black and add a different color to it any other color doesn't match green eyes(exept blond but then you would just imitate Toki mirage) I usually give him longish black hair with either Emerald green or silver tips(ot highlights)anyway I hope you will update soon.

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I like it! I look forward to the next chapter.

Maybe he should look "lighter"? Try blond. or...Maybe dark red...but he would look like Christmas.

Good first chapter

Keep the hair dark and maybe give him a tan? cause coloured eyes with a darker look is so hot!

C2ed update soon please :D:D