Reviews for Stories of the Lone Traveler |
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![]() ![]() ![]() We get it bro, you like the Harry potter universe. Relax. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wtf is an Mmmr? |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol yeah for social pressure...and nice they could be friends earlier |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love love love the burrow arc |
![]() ![]() ![]() That makes sense with the goblet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! Khan! That was perfect! I think Harry is getting around...kind of like Kirk who liked the ladies too lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Star Trek... this was fun to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how this one went! Seeing the aftermath is always fun too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve seen Hermione being called She-Who-Knits and The Dark Hat Lady in fanfics by house elves. She’d be properly mortified to learn the elves saw her the way most magicals see Delores Umbridge. Also, you have a recurring typo in this chapter, other chapters in this story, and in just about all of your other stories as well: every time you meant (from the context) to write the word stasis, you wrote the word statis instead. Stasis means something slowed or stopped so it is unchanging - in the context, magically suspended in time, in most of your stories, though the one where the Lone Traveler encounters the DY-100 Botany Bay uses statis to refer to technological cryo-stasis. And it should be stasis in all of those stories and chapters. Statis is a Middle English word that means the same as the modern word statute - a law enacted by a sovereign government. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Madam Pomphrey had been stereotypically arrogant/ignorant like most magicals, she might well have vanished Harry’s Universal Translator without saying a word - after all, it’s clearly foreign, looks muggle, and muggle things are useless. If it’s that easily detected, I’m amazed no healers have tried! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have a serious error in this chapter - after Harry warns the Weasleys about the interdict on the name Voldemort, Harry actually says “Voldemort” later in the same scene! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good arc |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story arc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing endings to both parts 5 and 6. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the multiple universes you explored in this story. Thanks for the add. |