Reviews for Stories of the Lone Traveler |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your work here with The Lone Traveler. There were some issues with this chap, mainly the Harry your writing about was from an AU not Canon, so... maybe laying out how things happened in canon here is a bit on the oops side. Also, Snape was not a hero. There are many things he was, but hero is not one of them. I know this is way too late to mean anything, but there you go. Thanks for writing and sharing, i am on my third read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All in all a great story! There were several chapters that I didn't understand at all due to not seeing the shows and missing that background. I enjoyed what I understood! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good wrapping up there! (though of course Snape will still be sent to Azkaban, or Kissed, because he knows who in the Ministry really was Imperiused and who wasn't, alas). Love the new universe, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, brilliant! But of course Dumbledore never thought 'Finite' would work, so he never tried it. Oops. I love all the changes in this chapter. Though I still find it hard to believe that neither Bella or Voldemort ever defeated Draco during the summer or the Christmas holidays, just to make sure Lucius and Narcissa behaved themselves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad harry gets some happiness |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice heavenly chat |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how efficient the goblins are |
![]() ![]() ![]() Way to tidy things up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dark but good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short but sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting philosophical chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice that harry got sword training |