Reviews for The Madhouse
cerise888 chapter 4 . 4/23/2011
Hey there,

I'm loving this series of yours. You are doing a great job especially keeping Tobi in character while adding more details about his personality. Can't wait to read more!
Seiya's Star chapter 11 . 1/9/2011
That was just beyond Awesome! Of course, since this Haruka loves Karasu as she does, of course she would want to do whatever it took to make him happy.
Seiya's Star chapter 10 . 1/9/2011
Awesome as always! *thumbs up*
Seiya's Star chapter 9 . 1/9/2011
OMG! You crack me up! I was Roaring in laughter! Oh thank you, not just for cracking me up, but for undoing the torture and continuing with the story! I think I'd seriously consider giving away all of my finances in the bank to have someone animate that scene with Karasu being dropped into the bathtub that already had Atori and Tobi in it! *sighs* Oh well, maybe when I die [and hopefully go to heaven], I can see such a sight...

Seiya's Star chapter 8 . 1/6/2011
Darn man, that was really awesome, in a funny, intriguingly-different-view-of-the-Dragon-Knight's kind of way! I love it though! Seeing and hearing there interactions as they share a house with a "normal" single mom. The blending of the La'Cryma gang with the current day household, told in interesting and funny, and revealing detail, is done really well!

And it was PURE EVIL to stop writing the fanfic at such a place, LOL! I want to see what happens when they try to give Karasu a "military shower down"! You've got to write the next chapter real, real soon, or I think I'm going to have a heart attack from impatience! _~
angel raziella chapter 8 . 6/8/2010
HAHAHA! And such a tender subject, poor Karasu, but, as cruel as it sounds, I'd still like to see his reactions to whatever the group has planned. I have just one question though, when did Asuka become aware of Karasu and/or Kosagi? _
angel raziella chapter 7 . 5/11/2010
Tobi is such a little brain box. It would be nice to see him take a few minutes away from the pc though.

Nice food for thought on the talk of different versions of different people. Tobi seems so down though.

It might be nice to see him actually keep an eye on the blonde maniac though. They are sort of friends.

Overall, good job, keep it up! _
angel raziella chapter 6 . 3/23/2010
_ hm, walks along at a comfortable pace but still nice. good job, _
angel raziella chapter 5 . 2/25/2010
(Kosagi shook her head. Wasn't the little geek doing his nut? "Atoris no good to me, not after the docs messed him up." She paused, "but he's got implants like the regular Soldiers have, but quantumised.")

What does this mean?

Otherwise, people keep picking on Atori's incontinence, but why is he incontinent in the first place? and why does Tobi sllep with Atori, in Lacryma at least?

Regarding my thoughts of the chapter, Kosagi really seemed to get out some of her thoughts. I'm surprise Tobi didn't just go for her. She so would have deserved a good kicking _

Once again, Haruka was such a meany! But I guess she is nearly a teenager and most go through the bitch phase. Not me personally, but most.

Either way, good chapter, Kosagi vs Karasu, a funny thought to think of them lacing into each other and Kosagi being pinned by kids, HAHA! _
angel raziella chapter 4 . 2/25/2010
Interesting _
angel raziella chapter 3 . 2/23/2010
Haruka was such a meany! Poor Atori! (commenting on Haruka's bedwetting joke) She had to pick on the mental guy, haha!

Well, pretty good so far. Nice little insight into Tobi and Atori's background there. What is "The dark place"? It might be a nice thing to elaborate on in other chapters. Good job, keep it up, _
angel raziella chapter 2 . 2/23/2010
Asuka has porn? Kosagi now has Asuka's porn? Ah well, its funny! _ The insults between Tobi and Kosagi was pretty funny too.

What is NGO?

Kosagi's comment on getting sunburnt is pretty funny too. But how would she know? The Knights were only on Lacryma's surface for battles against the destructrons. Ah well, I still found it funny, _
angel raziella chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Cute! Atori colouring in his arms and then Karasu's, cute! I find it so funny though that Karasu actually let him. Its not unbelievable though. It adds another aspect to Karasu's personality, good job!
CrimsonLaurana chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
I think the people are being weird and funny.