|Reviews for The Return|
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/6
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/21/2014
Great story! I like the concept and it was a well-done crossover. It would be cool to see more of Kara's life. Perhaps you can do some more one-shots. Thanks!
| MissOperaGhost chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Read my story Gotham City you'll love it if you love batman
| Phantom Dennis chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Wow, that's quite a jump considering Superman Returns did not end with Lois knowing the truth about Clark and she was stilll dating Stalin.
| Meteoricshipyards chapter 14 . 1/10/2011
OK, you had me completely fooled. I was racking my brain for various other Superman villains that might have offed Luther, but, not being very up on the comics, I was coming up with nothing.
Good twist. Great story.
| Meteoricshipyards chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
Not a big fan of Superman, but some TV versions have been good. This is a fun fic, though. Was surprised that they tried to track Superman's location. That could have been _bad_ if he called them on it. Good thing he's a good guy.
Thanks for the story; enjoyable.
| mcgairman chapter 16 . 3/27/2010
Really liked this one. I didn't watch much WEST WING; the liberal politics there is not my way of thinking. But I do like NCIS and have seen a few BONES episodes. You are an excellent writer. I hope you do more with Linda and Supes in this alternate universe concept you've dreamed up. Its very good and most plausible within the superman legend. Thanks for a good read and fun story. (P.S.-I've also followed some of your other stories. Again, very god work. Thanks for being a meticulous and accurate writer. I hate amateurish stuff.)
| HecatonchiresLM chapter 16 . 3/26/2010
I'm all for Mcgee and Supergirl! Sequel sequel!
| Kennie Gajos chapter 15 . 3/21/2010
As always with your stories, I've loved every second of this one. I didn't see either the Big Bad or the final showdown coming. Very well crafted and I loved the inclusion of Brennan and Booth. Looking forward to the epilogue!
| Allen Pitt chapter 15 . 3/21/2010
presumably the Kandorians were moved before all this? Ouch...
| Allen Pitt chapter 14 . 3/16/2010
hm...and now we see the origin of "Brainiac" ? And 'red light' to reduce her powers? yikes. Have to admit, in the tv series, the Jor-el computer was very high handed. Constantly taking Clark's powers away for minor 'infractions of the rules' etc.
In this case, they're really screwed. Super science etc. At least Clark isn't in the Fortress...
Hm. so is it nuts, or this is prior programming? Maybe Jor-el gave it conflicting instructions and it went nuts trying to obey them all? (that was Clarke's explanation for Hal's behavior after all)
| Allen Pitt chapter 13 . 3/13/2010
Ah, Logan & his sense of humor. I loved his "It burns...!" when sworn in on the Bible as deputy mayor...
huh. I thought for a minute last chapter that Clark was the big suspect. unless he is, and this is misdirection to keep him from suspecting, heh. I suppose Bruce is next on the suspect list, but Linda wouldn't be scared if he was. Interesting!
| Allen Pitt chapter 12 . 3/8/2010
about the only thing that might frighten Kara would be if Superman was behind it. But it's out of character for him to do it that way... and I'm sure there's a lot more to it than that. I have a few theories but they're just guesswork. Good job!
| Bobboky chapter 11 . 3/7/2010
| Allen Pitt chapter 10 . 3/5/2010
interesting direction to take it. Not enough info yet to speculate on who's behind all this (I like ther reference to the Jeffersonian) ...