Reviews for Goodbye
sarahmicaela88 chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
How could there be nothing for her there if she and Jake like each other so much?
hot chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
This is sooooo hot I want more
NUNICHAN chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
This was hot! I mean it's sad they're only friends with benefits, but still this was good. Very erotic.
KRYork chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
funny I just had a hard time getting past Jake...LOL but fun!

twimom76 chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
This was hot bb. Hardly ever see a confident Jake that knows what the hell he's doing *wink*. 'The Pack' band was too funny. But just the desert outing in Truck bed was fun fun.
jennayg123 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Woah there Bella, nothing left at all when you have sex like that? I understand though and I loved your story! Any chance of continuing it after the contest?
chele681 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Love the mattress in the back of the truck. Can't help but feel a little bad for Jake when she says there's nothing there for her, when he's looking right at her.