|Reviews for Lie Cold in the Ground|
| ilovevocaloid93 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
This story hasn't updated since 2010. And it's 2014 now. Either you update this story, or delete it.
| Donteatacowman chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Ohhh my goodness. This was horrifically creepily beautifully awesomely amazing! 3 Agh! I love this so much!
And I totally CALLED the casket thing halfway through the third paragraph! *punches fist in the air* The gradual realization Marik had... the overall scariness...! Oh dear, I love this to pieces! Thank you for writing!
| sarcasticrocker86 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Er.. you ARE going to update this eventually, right? Right?
Great START. Suspenseful and, though not surprising anymore from you, wonderfully in character.
Did I mention that you should update?
| Rehema chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
I have to say, this is an absolutely fabulous beginning! I really hope you update this! Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaassssseee!
You're also quite good at keeping Yami Bakura and Marik and Yami Marik in character! :)
| SharkbaitSekki chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
This is old... no matter, I liked it anyway O: You WILL continue it, right? ): Cause if not, I won't be able to sleep until I know what happens next xD Great job, and good luck with the rest!
| Ryou VeRua chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
No! Not Nick!
... I meant Malik. I swear I did.
Anyway, this was a wonderfully creepy beginning to what looks to be a very promising fic - and it was wonderfully enhanced by the song I'm listening to called 'rahu goldenslaughterer' (a soundtrack that plays whenever people die - and usually brutally). A real winner, there. You people reading the reviews - go look up this song and read this chapter again. So worth it.
I'll definitely have to check out Taming the Darkness for sure. Looking forward to the next update!
| Celestial Reign chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
WOW. Flipping creepy, but awesome at the same time. :D Loved it.
| MokoBunChan chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Please update it soon! 0o0
I think Yami Malik needs a hug...
| JiangShi chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Very creepy and well done. It sent shivers down my spine. I also enjoyed your other story Taming The Darkness. You're a good writer, keep it up.
| Mahersal chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
OMG! This is sick! I love it! No! Don't kill Marik! Yami Marik can die I don't care but not Marik! X'(
| cleverdeer chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I love the way you write your stories! I feel like I am the character sometimes... And also, people hardly ever write stories with Marik being all evil and stuff. I seriously enjoy reading your writing.
Oh, and GO EVIL MARIK!continue being all evil and cruel!
| phanpiggy chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
| NortheasternWind chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
D: That would be really, really,
really really really scary! Marik needs a hug and a rescue!
Pfft, veiny XD;
What a horrible realization, especially realizing that freaking out will only bring your death about faster! Poor Marik!
You'd better not leave it like this! T_T
| BlackRitual chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Oh GOD no...HE'S BACK! DX
...is it bad or good that I laughed at "He'd probobly be going all veiny"?
| ryoulover911 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
That. would. SUCK.
It defadently has to be a contender for the offical, "worst day ever" title.
I love stories were the character is buried alive and the others have to try to find them. Don't know why... must be my inner villain coming out. Mwahahahaha!
*clears throat* Ahem. Anyway... Great start!
*quickly changes gears and puts on best chibi eyes*
More soon please?