Reviews for Love, Insanity? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() First I think I must tell you, I practically LIVED for this for the last few days as I was reading it. XDDD I absolutely LOVED it. (I actually looked up and got the dates mixed up, thought you hadnt updated since 2009 and panicked, thinking that you weren't continuing it. XD I'm so stupid lol) There's only a few things I think you can improve on: 1, You make a lot of small spelling mistakes. Doesn't matter much, but they're there. XD 2, Unless I'm an idiot, I don't think I was the only one slightly confused at certain points with the characters. I figured it out eventually, but with characters like Dr. Honda, they just seemed to appear from nowhere because they didn't really have an into-description like the rest. It's just an observation, and it may have just been me being stupid. XD 3, I think it would be interesting to see a couple of the other patients a little clearer, like Gilbert's relations with Liz. I realize you probably have this planned or something, just given a heads up, I REALLY want to read more about the other patients a bit too. XDDD And finally, PLEASE continue it! XDDD I absolutely love it, great job. Now to wait for the next chapter. D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() fjasifjsaij ;U; awesome chapter! cant wait for Chapter 15! Good luck!~ 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This...This story is amazing. I really do not know how else to explain it, but but is seriously the best fanfic I have ever read. I loved how you did not rush the main parts, but added details to make it like a real story. I really do not know HOW you did it, or the way you formulated the plan to make this setting, this story, but whatever you did, it must have worked. I try to give critisism too in my reviews, but I literally have NOTHING bad to say about this at all. Great, great job, and I will be looking for more of your stories in the future, because you are an amazing writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() woohoo~ I like it~ Please continue~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love you for updating this! kyaaaah awesome chapter! w I actually had to reread the previous chap to remember this anyway damn hated Michael . he deserves the punishment! He should like totally be fired! he's pissing me off :\ oh and what will Russia do? I'm soooo curious! Is he like gonna make Toris insane as well 0.0) I hope not... |
![]() ![]() 14 chapters. 96,763 words. 191 or something reviews. Motherfuck, ain't that splendid? |
![]() ![]() I can't even begin to describe how happy i was when i saw that you updated! I wanted to scream and start jumping up and down with joy x.x Anyway... I loved this chapter(as always) it was great. That son of a beach Micheal needs to get his arse fired. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very cool chapter i so hope Michael gets fired or at least put somewhere else and i loved Toris at the end when Michael comes after him for telling the truth |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I was so excited to see you posted a new chapter when I was checking my email this morning :D Stupid lying Michael . I liked this chapter alot, I found it interesting and hopefully Ivan doesn't go to level 2 but I guess I'll find out next month. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Toris did all he could. I really hope things work out well for Ivan. But I do wonder why he was so happy to find out Toris' mother is also a mental patient. Sure they means Toris could have been a mental patient like the rest of them, but he isn't. I just hope Ivan isn't planning on breaking Toris so that he might fall into the mentally ill category. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I like reading it... Though faster updates would be nice, the longer chapters are nice too. XD;; I'm kind of undecided, I'm afraid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my Ivan, You have seemingly have broken Toris' trust. You've hurt him in a deeper way than anyone could... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I... I read the whole thing in one go. I couldn't stop reading :3 I really enjoyed this setting for some reason, and how you portray the characters in said setting. Some part of me has always been kinda interested how an institute like this would be run, and well, I supposed that it kinda gave me a bit of a clearer picture. I find myself relating to the back-stories behind Ivan and Toris. My childhood wasn't nearly as extreme, but I have issues still regarding stuff I witnessed when my father was ill. And some reminders of moments I have had in learning to help my man and myself cope with our respective 'loose screws'. I think I'll stop babbling before I get off on a tangent XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah I totally read this in one sitting. At first I had issues with this story cuz I come from a similar job as Toris. But for some odd reason I kept reading the story and in the end I loved every moment of this story. I can't wait wait for updates! |