Kyaaaaaa I love this story so much. Made my day when you updated. I'm so in love and writing this during school but I just couldn't wait. Please update soon! I cant stand another month without this lovelyness.

AAAh, this is my favorite fic~~ I love it so much! This chapter was awesome, I can't wait for more to happen~~ :D Keep up the good work! XD

Ivan. Is. So. Freaking. Cute. Adfhdiskagdj.

I was so happy that happened between them XD now just to wait for it to go further... Hur.

poor ivan...

:O Great Chapter! Cant wait for Chapter 14! Good luck!~ 3

Whoamygod...this has DEFINITELY been worth the wait. The chapter got my heart racing for various reasons. Your writing and creativity has never ceased to amaze me. My heart feels like it is in a vice for both of their pasts (which, again, were written so well...the emotions!) and at the very end. I particularly enjoyed the part after the kitchen episode, where Toris was calculating on what he should do with the leftovers, and what he should do next. The "Merry Christmas, Emilija" got me misty eyed. That part stood out to me. Also I am left thinking, what is going to happen to Ivan? Did they see the pills? Will Toris say anything? D:

After reading through it for the third time, I find myself trying to think of something else to say other than "OMG YOU ARE AMAZING" but I am having a really hard time to write anything of merit XD If you were ever to publish your stories, I would definitely rush out to the book stores to buy them :)

Anxious for the next update! (but no pressure of course _)

I love you :)

this got me into RussiaXlithuania

its one of my favorite fics now~~

anyway... Love it and love YOU~! XD

I started reading this story when I saw arafel's drawing of the trio... and now I have to say that I've become obsessed. XD GREAT job capturing the insanity/intimacy between Russia and Liet. The storyline is something I've never read before and I can't get enough of it! Please write more soon! I know we're all busy, but reading this has made my day.

Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve (or scarf) next! :D

I'm not finished with this story- not even this chapter- but I thought I'd pause in my downright SQUEALING to say that this is an amazing story. I hope it isn't abandoned. And the squealing part is because of Tino's appearance. I looked ahead a bit, spotted his name, and was reduced to wordless squealing. xD

Ah, that was simply amazing~! I didn't review the other chapters because I kept wanting to read more of your wonderful story! Please do keep on with the amazing talent of writing that you have~ I can't wait for the next chapter! 3

-Shiro

uym hey me again!

I accididently pressed the submit butten before I was finished and I have no clue how to get it back!

I'll just continue here. I kindof forgot what I was saying... I believe I was somewhere mid sentence.

This being an AU you are very close to writing an actual novel. Of course it's rewarding to recognise familiar characters but you just ned to tweak it a little and you could publish this as a novel. A lot of AU's are either only fun because they contain characters from a certain fandom while others are so changed you could just change the names and have completely different stories. yours is the perfect middle. You didn't touch the characters to much, you actually did it just enough!

It does is given that in fanfiction you already have a bond with the characters and that you're fammiliar with many of the jokes about tomatoes. They are little winks at the original story. Still I should criticise this as being fanfiction and not a novel of some sort! Because well it isn't! Yet the little jokes are very rewarding for the diehard fan! It's like if you get them all you know the series very well!

I also really like how you don't want every character to immediatly make a debut after he's been spoken of. So we have Roderich somewhere out there being a good husband but not doing much more interesting stuff. While I don't doubt that his perspective is interesting. Same goes for Matthew, working in the same building yet not necisairilly being in the spotlights because he's from hetalia. As a matter of fact the old lady behind the counter with the salt and pepper hair got more 'screentime' than he did. Yet we know more about him becasue we feel affinity to the character. And Francis says one or two things about him. But you are good ad keeping focus!

I'm saying all this as a good thing! The characters are there, they have dept, but they don't steal the show. It's a perfect balance! Because you don't throw them in for jsut the heck of adding another country to the cast.

All in all you've done an outstanding job and I'm abusing my rehresh button once more for chapter 13!

and now some random fangirling:

Does Prussia share his bed with 'old frits'? That would be just kyaa! I suppose they don't want to give him another bed becasue they're teaching him fritz isn't really there but they do keep a spare spot on the cough so I wondered...

It's kinda sad to imagine lonely Prussia saying things as

"well at least we're here together" or "They can't take us apart do they fritz?" Or just crying his bloody eyes out when medication no longer allows him to see his friend! ! !

and and, will doctor Kiku sleep with Heracles as well? I really wonder what Sara will think of that. They even did it in the actual manga! It's canon ( yay canon yaoi )

I really hope Francis will tell some embarasing things about Arthur. Because I'm somehow sure that they shared the bad more than once! I also highly doubt if Francis really has nymphomania or that he's just acting and needs a place to crash hahaha.

Arthur is just plain adorable... He doesn't want to be but he is...

Ivan is sexy as hell. If he wants to be, his entire way acting is just. omg, each time I think: O he's gonna do him this time! And then it doesn't happen again! Especially when he wasn't taking his medicine in order to be able to get aroused. ( I believe that was a side effect wasn't it?") I was all like 'ooh Toris you're gonna get it!' but they strapped him down. Better in the end...better.

pheew this is about the longest comment I ever wrote! But I hope you liked my rambling and fangirling!

I think I'll hear from you on Y! Gallery! Tough I also really need to create an acount here!

xoxox-

Yuria-chan!

Hey,

Here's the revieuw I promised on Y!Gallery. I hope you enjoy.

This story is built up in a professional manner and it does not resort to clichés that are bound to turn up in 50% of the fanfiction out there. Sometimes I have the feeling I'm just reading the same fic over and over again but with different names filled in. Your story however was form an entirelly different caliber! You don't want to throw in all the characters from the very start and aren't afraid to make real minor characters people that don't apear in the series. It's a good thing that you don't let these original characters take over the story. I suppose that there are many authors out there who would be so fond of their oc's that they would turn into complete mary sues. I like how half of them are uninteligent bullies like most of the real people are! That makes this story more realistic. While we are on realistic, the only thing that made me smile a little is that this is a very multi-culti bunch! Of course London knows many immigrants and with Hetalia fanfiction you're going to run into a problem like that. I do like how you pulled it straight by making Raivis and Eduard Lithauanian and Elizabetha and Roderich German. If they are related to a character there is no need to make them come from another country as well. I aproved of that.

I also really like the way doctor Yao speaks. It's not insulting becasue I'm also being tought by foreign professors at my university and while they speak of the most complicated matters concerning computers they do sometimes say weird things or sentences that are build up a bit awkward. Very realistic! IT hasn't got to do with education, but with being comfortable with the language! What did confuse me a bit is Alfred claiming to speak 'americanese' while his Daddy is the most Bristish l ad ever! I do love the word 'americanese'tough :P. Still it made me wonder where he's from.

You don't rush your story which is a good thing. Yet you're not draging along longer than neccisary. The very moment you are getting in the mood of 'okay we know it Toris you're home and tired etc.' you make something interesting happen! Like Francis suddenly appearing, or Feliks comming back from a holyday, or Heracles sleeping with Sara. Just small thing but they're briljant.

That's exactly what a good book needs!

You've got just enough side stories to keep it interesting but you don't let them overshadow the main plot. There are many things I'm really curious about, like: Does Antonio love Lovino? What did happen that Elizabetha punched Gilbo? Why did Gilbert get pils from Ivan (oh and puking over an orderly is just priceless!)? And uptill recently, does Feliks like Toris? What's up with Arthur and Francis? (tough in my heart I know)

and then there are the interesting points in the main storyline! Ivan! What did you do back there! And his sisters, they are so mysterious! Even Toris himself is an interesting round personality!

Also your use of other languages is pleasing. With many people I have the feelin they are just trying to show of. But you use it in a realistic way. there are other languages where they are supposed to be and they don't apear on stupid places. Like an example the text on Toris apron was worth 9999 internet points! It would only make sense that he got it back in Lithuania right?

I'm a student myself so when Toris is tired and hopeless or just riding the train I often sypathise with him! And it's also very realistic that he found out about the underground somewhere halfway the story! Little things like that keep characters human.

I kinda wonder what ilness Lovi is prone to actually...

I'm not really coherent in my critique I know, but I just go trough points I liked and that come to mind now...

I love Gilbert.

Im a fan of him, next to Ivan and Toris he's probably one of my bigest fandoms. Not even neccisairilly paired with someone I also like him on his own. Especially because It's hard to pair him with someone. I just love how you write him. He somehow is kinda tragic, but hilarious in the same moment. Just like Canon Gilbert. Each time I read about him well diong as much as anything in this story I'm super pleased! But that's just fan me haha I like your Prussia in general! I also read your other stories and he's great! This was just something I needed of of my heart. You don't need to make him more apearant or something...Just continue the way you're doing and it'll be fine!

I can't believe I've never read this before! It's awesome :D I know it's strange to review after 12 chapters, but I've only just found this story and wanted to read it all in one go.

Anyway, I think this is a very original idea, and you've handled the subject of it very well. I was a bit worried, cause I've seen fics like this before that did nothing but make me feel super-uncomfortable, but this ones perfectly cool. I like the fact that there are Hetalia characters AND OC's, there's a good mix in there :) Aside from Toris, of course, I like Sarah best, I think!

I look forward to the next chapter- do we get to see more of Raivis and Eduard at some point?

This was such a lovely chapter 33

Please, write more. I was so happy when I saw the review alert, you have no idea. You made my night ;3

Can't wait for the next update~

~Tamashii

I'm such a sucker for IvanXToris fluff...this chapter was really sweet :3