(Just adding to my statement)

It's funny... and cute! :D

Ohhoho! Ivan was jealous of Alfred? That's funny... XD

Well, Alfred seems cheerful! I liked this chapter! :D

"Yeah," Michael spoke up, "It's that damn Weillschmidt!" The name sounded familiar to Toris, and then he remembered the ash-haired man who Michael had been arguing with earlier that day. The one who was delusional, and talked to invisible people.

Lol, you would think Arthur would be the one to see invisible people sense he sees mythical creatures and flying mint bunnies! XD

You're an awesome writer! :D And I'm already in love with the story in the first chapter!

My friend Chapter_Untitled did a fanart work for this chapter and here is the link:

chapter-untitled.(LIET)deviantart.(LIET)com/gallery/#/(LIET)d4o6xa2

(without those LIETs of course)

This story is amazing and we all love it so much.:))

Pleeeease update soon,I really want to know what will happen in next chapter!:))

-Tani

I'm really enjoying this story so far.

It kind of reminds me of Ken Kesey's "One Flew Over The Cuckoo's Nest." Awesome book. c:

this story is AMAZING! :D

love it :)

Please keep writing and update soon!

Love it!

Updates always make me so happy! You really are an amazing writer. I loved all of this chapter, and I'm so happy that Ivan and Toris are both making progress!

And ah, I think this to should be too?

"Yes, I know, but you're taking things to literal."

very cool chapter i like Toris's talk with Antonio at the end

First of all I want to say that I seriously spazzed a little when I saw the update in my inbox. I immediately started reading it and this was an awesome chapter like all the others! I can't wait for more. ouo Don't end it too soon! I really hate it when fanfic writers have a really awesome story or plot line and it ends suddenly, everything being quickly wrapped up and leaving me with far too many question. "What happened to them or them? And did this happen or this?" and such. Love your writing, can't wait for more.

awesome sauce!:D I was /just/ thinking about this story too!

It really is well written and I cant wait for the next update, but don't stress yourself out, kay? ;)

Happy New Year to you as well! I loved this chapter. I'm glad that you went more into the history of Toris, and his family; as I said in a past review, I love your Antonio so much.

"She would stand there. Just stand there while he hit us! She would even blame us, or tell him something else we'd done! Anything to try and make him like her! She never raised a hand to me or my brothers, but she hurt us all the same."

Around this part of the fanfiction hit home well - since I know where he's coming from in this, I can say with utmost honesty that I think you're doing a fantastic job describing it. I'm actually a bit upset that this fanfiction will be ending soon; but when it does, I won't stop reading it. Again, what a great chapter.

Yay! More chapters, I'm so excited and happy to see this continue! I've read a lot of your stuff elsewhere, big fan!