|Reviews for The Dance|
| Red Bess Rackham chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
This was really lovely! I loved the look into Gaila, and her background. Great writing! :D
| Alalaes chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
I wish I could see a visual representation of the dance. All up fantastic writing; I liked the touch of bittersweet melancholy at the end.
| onewhowatches chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Wow. I mean, this was amazing. Just so amazing.
| Lionheart Rising chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
This was beautiful! I like the way you tied Gaila and the other girl together.
-Dryad Warrior Queen
| SparklyLalala chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
That was beautiful, and the ending was tear shedding.
| Gul Bricett chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
1. I love Gaila.
2. I love this story, with its carefully crafted background. Extra bonus: you found a way to include the "other Orion" ( Diora Baird from the deleted scene).
| TheDreamerLady chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
I really enjoyed your take on Gaila. Please, feel free to write more stories, for I would love to read them.
| Elliesmeow chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Lovd the anthropological lore here. And the time given to flesh out a previously minor character. Very interesting. Thanks for posting.
| bluehorserunning chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Thanks for a story about Gaila. She's a fascinating character that too often gets relegated to 'Kirk slept with her to get access to the Kobiashi Maru program, the end,' or 'she's Uhura's perky roomate, the end.'
| Hidden Relevance chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Ok this was absolutely beautiful. I really don't have any other way to describe it. You've given Gaila such a stunning backstory and woven it into the present and into your other characters so well. gah.. I would love to see more in the vein I think...
| Artemiis Boz chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
this is such a fantastic, well thought out story! You put an incredible amount of effort into understanding the small facets of the character. This is a beautiful and intelligent story. Right on!
| Trekkie2 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
As always, great writing!
| meganM57nebula chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
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| Harm Marie chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
I loved the tone you set in this.