|Reviews for A New Chance At Life|
| Ace of Spies chapter 6 . 9/28
Hopefully Giovanni will be a bigger threat here than in the anime
| Slowdude chapter 18 . 8/17
Heh Swellow vs Latios.
| Guest chapter 26 . 8/16
Lake trio could reverse prison ball sideffects
| PokeMan chapter 22 . 8/5
So just saying sorry it was a mistake a book and no punishment for Lance despite his dangerous actions...welp I'm done is a good fiction but there are too many things to dislike and I ain't no hater...soo good luck with the fic...
| PokeMan chapter 21 . 8/5
Welp Ash put a good fight but wasn't enough that should teach him to rely on a single Poke to win like Gary said after losing one learns a lot...
Loss all respect for Lance thought he was a cool guy willing to teach and help others but he is just a thief if the authority doesn't do anything I'm dropping this story cuz it would be unfair if he attack Ash simply to take Latios from him... that puts him on the same level as team rocket and the poachers
| PokeMan chapter 19 . 8/5
Welp glad to be wrong on the defeat part but Harrison did the same thing Ash did to him in the anime damaging his Ace to the point that couldn't compete and lost the following match...probably what gonna happen to Ash if he doesn't take train Pika and Chari harder but never was expecting that won the Johto league...
| PokeMan chapter 18 . 8/5
Like I predicted Harrison is gonna get more prestige than Ash cuz while he have a Legendary Poke, Harrison is gonna defeat it and prove Legendary can be defeated with the right strategy and without pure power also is in front of a lot of people that gonna be super humiliating for Ash and Latios.
| PokeMan chapter 15 . 8/5
Remembering now the Police on Pokemon is pretty useless they almost never captured the criminals always escape someway o another even in the movies
Always hated that part of Pokemon way to innocent even for a kid show...they let people hurt or even kill pokes go unpunished...Here even tho polices are killed nothing have been mentioned...Sad that Ash has to rely on Latios to win and prob means that Latios will suffer another loss in front of everyone...cuz his next opponent is strong and have the advantage of knowing Ash team ad counter Latios measures...
| PokeMan chapter 13 . 8/5
Ash is lucky he has friends willing to train his pokes he is acting kinda irresponsible by not doing his proper job as a trainer cuz his Brock and Misty are the ones training his pokes.
A little weird that Latias could be a possible partner for Ash cuz she is a poke but another girl wants to marry which is crazy those Red eyes must be his secret
| PokeMan chapter 5 . 8/4
Not hating your story is good but this Ash not so much
| PokeMan chapter 5 . 8/4
How old is Ash on this?
Cuz he is acting very inmature and stupid his poke are known to learn many moves but the dumbass go and use the ones that leave him wide open for a attack like hyper beam multiple times and apparently he will do the same mistakes as he did in canon like not changing his team and training all his pokes, not to mention his attitude and lack of knowledge Brock and Misty aren't Latios trainers but are doing all the work because Aash is too useless to properly training his own poke all in general..Not saying Ash should change in one day but still is too much reading about this dumb Ash he gonna get humiliated on the League.
| Arkinstone chapter 1 . 7/17
HAHA I FINALLY FOUND THIS AGAIN!
| MichaelNS chapter 2 . 6/12
Just re-reading waiting for chapter 18..
| MichaelNS chapter 1 . 6/10
literally just re reading this waiting for chapter 18 of adventure ;p
| zephyr hb chapter 21 . 5/26
love this but.
Still eleven, varely twelve?