Ash is lucky he has friends willing to train his pokes he is acting kinda irresponsible by not doing his proper job as a trainer cuz his Brock and Misty are the ones training his pokes.
A little weird that Latias could be a possible partner for Ash cuz she is a poke but another girl wants to marry which is crazy those Red eyes must be his secret

Not hating your story is good but this Ash not so much

How old is Ash on this?
Cuz he is acting very inmature and stupid his poke are known to learn many moves but the dumbass go and use the ones that leave him wide open for a attack like hyper beam multiple times and apparently he will do the same mistakes as he did in canon like not changing his team and training all his pokes, not to mention his attitude and lack of knowledge Brock and Misty aren't Latios trainers but are doing all the work because Aash is too useless to properly training his own poke all in general..Not saying Ash should change in one day but still is too much reading about this dumb Ash he gonna get humiliated on the League.

HAHA I FINALLY FOUND THIS AGAIN!

Just re-reading waiting for chapter 18..

literally just re reading this waiting for chapter 18 of adventure ;p

love this but.
Still eleven, varely twelve?

It should be pointed out that your custom ball is way to overpowered for this type of fanfiction. That an I'm pretty sure most of the legendaries could just smack the ball away, even if there were weakened from combat. "like whiscash did in that one episode"

So umm, i enjoyed the chapter a bit but it was either this chapter or last chapter where Charizard was admonished for cracking his knuckles. Cracking your knuckles does not increase your chances of any bone disease. At all. It’s a common misconception thanks to a bunch of parents of hated the noise.

In the words for a person who is a physiotherapist. You’re just dispersing a pocket of air. Nothing special. If it’s painless you should be fine.

Very good! I look forward to more!

Is he Hoenn story going to be continued?

Thank you. This is a very iconic Pokémon fanfic and deservedly so. This is a fun and light world that you just want to sink into. Far too many stories stray from the lightheartedness and wonders of life—as an eager reader, I thank you for this story. Worlds like these feel the most like Pokémon to me!

I always find myself feeling hesitant when I see such high stakes like this prison ball. It sounds like there will be a huge blow to the main characters, especially to one of the Legendaries in Ash's possession, but most people avoid that. They either asspull a way to fix any damage or just don't affect the main cast when a death should be implimented. It isn't enough to make me stop, mostly because I have greatly enjoyed the story up to here, but I am still worried about the easy way out being taken instead of a more painful event.

Maybe that's just me though.

I have a question. I've just read 2 chapters and it seems to me that you're foreshadowing Ash/Latias. If thats right then I'm sorry to say I cant continue reading this story because it feels weird. But I wish you the best. If thats not right can you please send me a reply and let me know? I'd appreciate your candor.

man lance is a dick in this