Reviews for A New Chance At Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Even if this is the fifth time I read this story, I still find it so good that I want to read it again. Stay awesome. GamingVirus |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story but a possible quick correction. Last part when Giovanni speaks. "I'll (Sigh) an order.." I think you may have meant Sign an order but yeah. Re-reading this story, I find that it's still amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job on the re-writes! Hope you're doing okay, you're situation seems really rough. Here in Venezuela, it's not pretty either. I thank you for giving us such a great story and for being the inspiration for me writing my own. Also quick possible correction. "Some of Team Rocket's best scientists have been working on a project in top secrecy for the last decade. Now it is nearing (competition)." Did you mean completion? Idk. Either way, Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() u need to re-upload this u know when u read it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed a lot and loved ot so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() i would laugh so had if togetic got self-destruct or explosion lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really surprised that you dont make Ash utilise Latios' invisibility. Or the ability to read minds. He could have confused the pokemon. Made it react slower to the trainser's command. Many more possinilities. He should become invisible and dodge sometimes. So many more tricks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You NEED to continue this so much you know this right |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does this story have to be so darn... AMAZING? Like it! Like it! LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. I hope you continue it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This was SO great! I loved the whole entire thing! And... is Ash starting to get psychic powers? I mean, he kinda heard Gary's thoughts... Oh, I'm SO reading the next one RIGHT NOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I. Fucking. Called. It. And I wish I didn't... I can only see this happening one of 3 ways: 1) Ash magically stops Team Rocket from using any of their Prison Balls, and destroys them. 2) Team Rocket Succeeds, and a massive Deus Ex Machina is pulled that releases the captured legendaries and gives them back their memories. 3) Team Rocket succeeds, and when Ash inevitably destroys all the Prison Balls all the legendaries captured are effectively dead. Though, this path could technically be avoided if Ho-oh's "would let you stay dead" line was foreshadowing; and they do die before being resurrected with all their original memories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just had a very random thought... can Dittos transform by memory? If so... what would happen if Ash caught a Ditto and had Latios transfer Ash's memories of all the Legendaries he's met to said Ditto? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck... please tell me Team Rocket doesn't have "Dark Master Balls" or something now... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to go out on a limb and say that the egg is a Riolu. |