Bummed it wasn't a Rayquaza haha

Darn, not a baby Rayauaza.

It's a Rayquaza egg isn't it, being dark green

I mean, realistically, the better trained your Pokemon, the more capable of autonomous battle they should be, with the occasional input from the Trainer.

I approve of corpse making.

Definitely far from the worst I've seen, so pretty good.

While Ash being dumb is still painful, you do at least let him learn a bit, which is better than what I know of the show.

The ron twins are cool

I like this story thus far, the only issue I have is this chapter. It could've been used to create some proper character development for Latios by creating a rift in his and Ash's friendship.

Instead Latios straight up caused a fate worse than death, Ash feels bad for an afternoon and then forgives him with no character development.

Dont usually review but got to say i love what you did with the story glad I found a lengthy story where ash travels with the Ron twins enjoyed it very much. Not really any mistakes to mention im just about to start the sequel. So again thankyou for entertaining me.

I was under the impression Ash was only ever going to capture Latios, since Latias didnt like battling for sport?

The only one worse in navigating is Leon. I wonder how they'll react and that Ash will be glad that there's someone who's even more directionless than him.

ash really should learn how to train his own pokemon. it seems like Brock is doing everything.

damnit please no Pokemon relationships. they're fucking gross. it's like fucking your dog and saying you love each other.

I have read the 27 chapters of the story quickly. It's such a good story. It has kept me hooked from the beginning, and very well written too