Reviews for Superiority
IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 1 . 7/17
Awwww, Tim...
Nice one!
bjq chapter 1 . 1/22
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
Good insight.
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Cool insight. Catch ya on the flip side.
Mokibobolink chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Wow, such an interesting look into the mind of McGee. Never would've thought he felt like that, yet when I read it, it made sense and the "voice" was just right - sounded just like him.

Great job!

NickTonyK chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Pretty good!
whatweareafreaidof chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
good writing, interesting take..

but what did tim do about tony father, he told him he was broke becosue tony ask him to that all he did..

tony should be asking forgive for all the crap he gave megree for the years, yony tease but he also make fun of, tim girlfriends his wight, hell he make a joke of tim being fat when kate was kill, ( look like he blame tim) or when the dog nealy kill him, or when his girlfriend was going to kill him, he made a joke about saveing ziva that tim did nothing, not counting tim save tony life,

tim has gone to fare a few time, but tony does it all the time, tim tell tony nothing about his life,becoue tony no respecet for it every think a joke, he bring people over to tim place break in, to make fun of him, so tony is a bad friend...
Sergeant Conley chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
This was a really good story over all, though I found myself having difficulty believing Tim thinks himself lower than Tony in terms of deserving the friendship given the attack dog video prank among others.