|Reviews for Interstitium|
| Urtext chapter 2 . 11/24/2016
The five legged fetus thing absolutely floored me. Tells me so much about Wilson's character, in such a small anecdote.
I read this a few years ago, and am reading it again and finding these little details.
Amazing work. I'm happy this exists.
| TheMortalMan chapter 33 . 11/23/2016
I know this is a little bit old now and I doubt you'll read this, but this is one of the better stories I've ever read on this site.
You've struck a balance between fan-service, narrative and pure quality that I doubt some fully fledged writers can achieve. You've clearly mastered the art of constructing characters and evolving them. Not only is this novel an incredible addition to Mass Effect, but it's also an incredible stand-alone piece as well. Your dedication to it was, and still is, inspiring.
So yeah, I'd just like to say thanks. Thanks for the countless hours of quality reading and for the countless more hours you spent producing a piece of work that you really should've earned some serious cash for. Cheers, AssaultSloth.
| RG chapter 3 . 9/20/2016
And my Shepard was a displaced Sith Lord, muhahahaha
| Guest chapter 33 . 3/25/2016
Great story! Seriously awesome work kudos for dedication!
| DragonsDeadAndDancing chapter 31 . 1/19/2016
You are a saint. This is perfection.
| DragonsDeadAndDancing chapter 6 . 1/14/2016
I love you. This chapter alone makes me wish to, I don't know, file a breeding request...ahem.
You are a fantastic person and an awesome writer. Never let anyone else tell you otherwise.
| Guest chapter 33 . 12/14/2015
Just finished, whew, good, very good...as much as I enjoyed, and still enjoy me, me2, and yes me3. ... your take on my favorite game was enjoyed and appreciated, thank you for your time and your great story telling
| ptjz2015 chapter 33 . 10/21/2015
This is definitely one of the best Mass Effect fan-fiction I have read. You portrayed each character superbly and the story is extremely well-crafted. (The Legion chapter is especially impressive.) I look forward to reading your take on Mass Effect 3 and I wish you the best of luck in your novel.
Once again, thank you for giving us this tour de force, and I have no doubt that many people, including myself, relished it. Bravo!
| kaemsi chapter 8 . 9/19/2015
Even though I doubt you'll be seeing this, AssaultSloth, because this story was completed almost 18 months ago, I had to ask: why Africa?
It's quite the overlooked continent, as a whole, and very rarely garners international interest unless some charity drive or war that affects someone else puts it there. And of all the countries to focus on in Africa, Namibia? South Africa? What was your prompt for those?
Also, how did you build the specific political situation in Africa that you wrote in the codex? Was that referral to the current state of affairs and extrapolation, or was it done by some other means?
Call me curious. :)
Otherwise, your style is damn unique and I'm practically inhaling the story out of sheer enjoyment. You've got a keen eye and a great way of capturing and writing the different characters' voices, and your take on Kelly is at least somewhat redeeming, even though I still cannot stand her guts (her personality is not the issue, but whoever wrote her character clearly did no research into the kind of behaviour psychologists have, but that's an argument for another day). This is one of the better stories to be found on and I'm looking forward to where this story is going. Cheers to you, man!
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/19/2015
I genuinely got a bit wet around the eyes when allere (think that's how it's spelt not sure) died, wonderfully crafted story, love the series so far.
| cavlin chapter 9 . 8/7/2015
Your skill is amazing. I hope to get a Liara chapter. Now your Grunt is awesome! Please write more with Grunt. I was laughing so hard! I love Grunt.
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/25/2015
Your portrayal of Grunt is just hilarious. Well done!
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/25/2015
| Admiral Saris chapter 33 . 6/12/2015
:) I really enjoyed the story, your secondary characters felt so much more alive. Especially Grunt.
| Admiral Saris chapter 30 . 6/12/2015
If I had to pick any character to jump into ME4 with... I think Garrus is probably the best choice but I like the idea of his story ending with Shepards... Hmmm none of the others really make great lead characters.