Reviews for Amata's Journey
Mojako chapter 7 . 1/18
i hope you keep this up
Luke J chapter 7 . 8/10/2014
This is pretty good. Shame it is unfinished...
Guest chapter 7 . 7/9/2014
need to finish it
Guest chapter 7 . 1/25/2014
You should incorporate some romance between Amata and the lone wanderer maybe a lemon or an implied/referenced lemon. Also bit you should add more enemies such as ghouls,talon company mercs,robots,etc. You should probably add something later on like them returning to vault 101 for a bit and have like raiders find the vault and they have to protect it. (I tried not to write a story but I failed)
Guest chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
Love it. However, you overpowered Amata too Quickly in the begining. You should have the lone wanderer teach/mentor her ,show her the ropes and teaching and helping her to not let kills get to her
Guest chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
That bastard gave his own poor daughter a black eye! Update! Please!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/21/2013
This is really good. I like the references to certain segments of the game e.g Dogmeat.
falloutfan chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
I know its probably too late but...

I really hope you finish this. Im so hooked ive read it all a bunch of times and I need it to live!
randomfofan chapter 7 . 1/5/2013
MOAR
devoutchristhayer chapter 7 . 3/14/2012
That's a fantastic story, but I think there should be a little more dialogue. There wasn't much in chapter five and six.
Ronin Kenshin chapter 7 . 10/23/2011
this is a good fic hope ya finish it good work
Kingswriter chapter 7 . 10/2/2011
Interesting little story so far. Like that we see how Amata level's up.
Alavon chapter 7 . 4/24/2011
This is very good. When will you update?
IrishRed5 chapter 7 . 12/23/2010
this is very engaging by far my favorite fallout story ive read so far! keep going!
xJ4CKOFSPAD3Sx chapter 6 . 12/2/2010
Good story.

Only inconsistency I saw was that Amata's radio was on but it seemed no one else heard it and she could sneak around without it alerting others.

Sneaking in-game with the radio on is a no-no.
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