|Reviews for Moment Spoiling|
| BlueNynaeve chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
| name chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
I would like to impress upon you the need for commas and punctuation.
Yours: co-pilot. "Chewie what's going on?"
Chewbacca laughed before answering. "Sweethearts' day huh? I suppose that should have been obvious"
More correct: co-pilot. "Chewie, what's going on?"
Chewbacca laughed before answering.
"Sweethearts' day, huh? I suppose that should have been obvious."
Check out for articles on proper dialogue punctuation. It is distracting from the story when not implemented.
| startrekkienerdgirl chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
that was so cute very funny when han chased wes OMG HAHAHA! oh man i could not stop laughing good job! ;)
| LynnisaMystery chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Ahh, I love the Rogue Squadron and their antics. Definitely the best ending ever!
| Jedi Arwen Sparrow Winchester chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Aww this rocks! its so funny, you've done an excellent job!
| Maelwys idokle chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Juss! Yah! hahah!
| blablah chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
made me smile :)