Reviews for Jealousy
wondercloud chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
I especially liked that you ended Brennan and Booth with her question. Sometimes leaving us to imagine things like that is the best way!
Autumn Dae chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Aw, that would be a great scene to see. Fabulously done.
vacruz2 chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
"Jealosy in five damn languages"

Loved that! Hahahaha I can picture her thinking that lol

and her realizing that they're in a relationship, and him saying that they have been for a long time: priceless! :)
housexbonesobsession chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Awesome story! I love this line- "He saw it every time he looked in Catherine's blue eyes and didn't see his beautiful anthropologist looking back." It's so powerful. Well done. :) I always love your stories.
Aching Bones chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Hi there,

Really nice piece...Loved...

'He felt disgusted at the fact that he knew he was in love with someone and dating someone else'...

Sorry, can not feel any empathy for Catherine at all...Just glad that he realised that there in only one person for him and that is Bones...Also love how Bones realises that they have been in a 'relationship' for a long time...

Thank you for this and Happy Birthday...

Ger
my-completeness chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
I really enjoyed this, very good! see ya later Dr Klein!
nopenname66 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Em -

I wish I could give you a chocolate covered Booth, but I cannot. However, in honor of your upcoming birthday, I will tell you that I loved this story very much. I always enjoy your writing.

Since Bones is already picked up for next season, in order to avoid jumping the shark, Hart Hanson et al will have to mess with Booth and Brennan. I suppose it will all be worth it in the end...

Peace.

And Happy Birthday.

Sue
sketchnurse chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Well, I liked it- sweet, and full of what the show really needs. And it may or may not be MY birthday in three days, so cheers to that! Good job!
Bonesy Babe chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Happy Birthday! And I think you did a great job with this one-shot. my first read through of the beginning I thought it was Bones sitting at the table and I wanted to scream. Then I read it again and figured it out. I thought you did a great job. :)
FanFicFan09 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
First, Happy Birthday! Like other reviewers, I can't do anything to help you with the chocolate-covered Booth. Sorry :(

Second, thanks for the FanFic! This is a wonderfully sophisticated piece of writing. Totally in character, the switching is pleasingly complicated to read - reread - through. It's interesting to see how I can get suckered so easily but then laugh at myself and tip my glass to you.

Oh, and third, like the other reviewers I like the two lines: "Just a moment though." and "Jealousy in five damn languages." I'll add one more though, just for the tone and the wry, blank, serious look I can imagine Bones saying it with: "Then why haven't we had sex yet?"

I'll watch for more of your stories; keep 'em coming!
hrhdana chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
i dunno, parts of that were downright angsty!

well done!

kept me going right til the end!

really enjoyed this story, lucky she didnt loose him!

happy birthday too!
AlabamaBound chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
I love this story! Thanks for sharing! If you get a chocolate coated Booth for you birthday I'd love to share that with you! LOL!

Great job!
deltainfinity chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Oh! I loved this! Great job :)

I thought you died. Seriously.

And happy birthday! Mine was a couple weeks ago :) teehee

I cannot wait for your next fantastic fic :))

Maeghan
B and E chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Chocolate-coated Booth would be amazing. 8D 3

I live this part: "Jealousy in five damn languages."

hehehe

-E
allthatisevil chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Just for playing the birthday card I won't review until the 20th!

Nah, I can't resist it ;)

I am spoiler free, so I have no idea of what you meant on the author's not.

As for the fic, god, you made me suffer. I was screaming in my brain (because I'm at work) WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH BOOTH, DAMN IT! But then it was all fine and soothing and lovely. I was able to breath again. Yeah, I simply love it.

"Jealousy in five damn languages" and "Just a moment though" killed me. I loled as quietly as I could.

The first couple of lines of the last part were mean, though. Ok, not mean, but close. They freaked me out, just for a moment.

See you,

allthatsevil
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