Reviews for Sneak Attack
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
I really liked this but you spelled Eraqus's name wrong through the entire fic. It bugged me for some reason.
Star-Shaped-X chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
A story of Xehanort and Eraqus training? Sign me up. :3

I really like the narrative comments Eraqus has on Xehanort's keyblade, as well as on his own. :) Good reflection on his personality. (And then of course the "blinding" reference. P)

Oh . . . uh . . . well, that fight scene sure changed quickly. XD I think my brain took longer to catch up to that than Eraqus's did. XP No seriously, I had to reread the fic and make sure I hadn't missed something. XD

I can't say I'm a fan of this pairing, so that kiss really through me for a loop at first, but I found it pretty hilarious when I read on and realized Xehanort's true intentions. Um . . . all's fair in love and war? ; Nah, something tells me if their master had been around this wouldn't have been considered a legitimate win. XP

Ow, Eraqus, geez . . . Groin-kicking is /definitely/ lower than kissing. . Not that I'd put it past you, but still.

Hm . . . why was their master not watching the fight anyway? Or perhaps that's just part of the challenge . . . P

Anyway, yeah, this was funny so I suppose I certainly enjoyed it. P I do wish we knew a bit more of Young Xehanort's day-to-day personality, as well as /any/ of Eraqus's as a young adult . . . Maybe someday. :) Until then I shall be ever on the hunt for more fics like this one. :D

(P.S. - I took a look at the picture you mentioned too - nice drawing. :) I love Eraqus's design (and his shocked face - lol XD).
Lord L.H.J chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Amy chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
This. This is awesome.

*thumbs up*
TonberryBlue chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
This one made me laugh so much.

It was very clever and I could just imagine the horrified look on Eraqus face when he realized Xehanort was a really good kisser. My favorite line is when their master said:

"What the hell? I've only been gone for five minutes!"

Best ending!

~Dare or No Dare
Snowlily246 chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Update Power Sorce!
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 2/17/2010