Reviews for It's just the little things
Guest chapter 19 . 8/26
"Jack's dark head".
Jack is blond like his mother was. Have you ever even watched the show?!
jfc
Guest chapter 19 . 8/26
"It was obvious that he didn't have a clue as to how young people conducted relationships."
Young people? Emily is only five years younger than Hotch. The way this story has been written looks like Hotch is Rossi's age and Emily is Reid's age. Very creepy.
Also, in the early chapters it looked as if you were writing Hotch as an abusive parent that his son was very afraid of. Being the son of an alcoholic and abusive father, Hotch would never yell at Jack, especially when he is still so little.
HijabiGirlForever786 chapter 48 . 4/27
Beautiful story. I'm so sad to see it end.
AMRainer chapter 48 . 7/11/2016
Read it all in a sit! it's just perfect!
Guest chapter 48 . 11/17/2015
Heartbreaking story, with glimmer of hope for future.
Spitfire303 chapter 48 . 6/18/2015
beautiful :-D
Spitfire303 chapter 39 . 6/18/2015
that is the best answer he could give :-P
Spitfire303 chapter 7 . 6/18/2015
Percy jackson and the lighting bolt thief :-P the movie aint bad but as always the books are far better :-D
Guest chapter 48 . 4/11/2015
Loved this story.
Guest chapter 12 . 4/11/2015
I love Sean.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Haha. Great start. Can we take her home?
Tigger4eva97 chapter 48 . 1/9/2015
Please do a sequel we need to know what happens
Guest chapter 31 . 10/23/2012
good story, but i also pegged Rossi as more of a scotch guy, especially with all of his money
Syfja chapter 41 . 9/10/2012
Aww poor Derek. I totally understand him.
Hazmatt chapter 9 . 7/3/2012
Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! The stuff about their past was wonderful, deep and moving! I love that Hotch was trying to protect Emily even back then! Very sweet! Who was recording them? Morgan? I hope everything works out!
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