Reviews for A secret told
ChloboShoka chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
This could have been really good, but it will need a lot of work. I get this feeling that you're not comfortable writing lemons, if you don't want to write it, you shouldn't feel under any pressure in doing so.

The big block of text is a real turn off for me and I think to improve this you can work on punctuation and space out the sex scene so it's more easier to read.

Hope that helps.
1230james chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Not that bad compared to other fanfics like this. Nice job!
A-lost-wandering-bee chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Arble-girl chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Heehee awesome!
GUESS WHO XD chapter 1 . 5/2/2010

That was absolutely brilliant. :D
youfaggot chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
not good