|Reviews for A secret told|
| ChloboShoka chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
This could have been really good, but it will need a lot of work. I get this feeling that you're not comfortable writing lemons, if you don't want to write it, you shouldn't feel under any pressure in doing so.
The big block of text is a real turn off for me and I think to improve this you can work on punctuation and space out the sex scene so it's more easier to read.
Hope that helps.
| 1230james chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Not that bad compared to other fanfics like this. Nice job!
| A-lost-wandering-bee chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
| Arble-girl chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
| GUESS WHO XD chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
OH MY GOSH, TAY-CHAN!
That was absolutely brilliant. :D
| youfaggot chapter 1 . 4/22/2010