|Reviews for Vigilance|
| Unseen Watcher chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Wonderful. Great. I knew he couldn't just walk away from a war without scars inside and out. Here's to the strongest crew around.
| doubledamn chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Nice. LuNa might be the most over done pairing ever, but its also the sweetest. Ever since they had that 'time stops when I first saw you thing' I thought Oda was going to go somewhere with it. And considering the canon is only about half way through it might actually happen. Great story.
| Kaoru likes One Piece chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
i love it... instant fav
| scythe's seranade chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
I love it how suprisingly powerful it is that ace says thank you. Awesomely powerful, you're great at writing!
| hoshiakariDreamer chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Oh wow - this is really beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing it.
| Baxter54132 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Gosh, this was spectacular, thank you so much.
| VeraVera chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Wow this story had me in pure awe. I normally don't like LuNa that much but this one made me like the pairing. VERY WELL WRITTEN! You wrote this so well, good job! I love it.
| moulinrouge32 chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
This. was. awesome. No more need be said.
| Strawhatqueen chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
That was brilliant, had a tear in my eyes twice.
Nami telling him that it was Ace's job to protect him..:'( That was the saddest part, because Luffy really meant the world to his brother.
And his presence at the end..now he knows his baby brother will be fine around his nakama.
| Major Session chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Not sure if I like the tense too much but apart from that...
Fantastic imagery, great emotions and excellent character development.
Some heart wrench and heart warmth.
| JanieZ chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
This was by far one of the most beautifully written One-Shots about this theme... It was so heartwrenching I nearly cried. You captured the emotions perfectly... Really amazing.
This one will head straight for my favourites :D
Hope you'll continue writing such beautiful stories.
| Reignashii chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
painfully beautiful, but loved it!
| moira33 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
It was awesome!I totally felt the different JOB
| Lyneel chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
ah, that was beautiful... Had a tear in my eye once or twice... or most of the time ;) it's heartbreaking to see such sorrow, to know that some unbelievably precious elements are gone... It's very painful to see the changes, even though I agree, that sometimes they indeed may turn out necessary. Having friends at times like this is probably the only way to live through the hell and keep the sanity, regaining will to live and then remaining strong, trying once again to make your path through the life. I loved most the part about older siblings protecting the younger ones... It can be so true... So sad at times, so beautiful most of them...
Thank you for this story! It was a great investigation of time, I believe! :)
| Daz Lee chapter 1 . 1/19/2012