Reviews for Beyond Time
Judyblue95 chapter 21 . 11/1/2014
As I continue to read this story, I am truly in awe of the high level of craftsmanship and ingenuity that your writing possesses. I am very much enjoying every word! I don't care to speculate any more on the outcome, I'm just going to enjoy the ride!
Judyblue95 chapter 20 . 11/1/2014
Bella is playing with the future here...her interactions with Carlisle, Edward, Alice, and now James seem to have the potential to alter things irrevocably. What if Alice ceases to exist because James never changes her? The possibilities are endless. I can't wait to see how you work
this all out! Hooray for Bella's self defense!
Judyblue95 chapter 19 . 11/1/2014
I like your theory of trees. Quantum physics/mechanics is a favorite of mine and it fits right in with how I see the universe.
James! UGH! could he be the one in the alley?
Judyblue95 chapter 17 . 10/30/2014
that was some kiss! I wish Bella would confide in Carlisle...
Judyblue95 chapter 16 . 10/30/2014
oh leave it to Alice to muck things up by inviting Carlisle to dinner at the boarding house! I can't wait to see how this all plays out. It's all so cleverly done.
Judyblue95 chapter 15 . 10/30/2014
a drunk Edward is certainly a lusty Alice has actually materialized there! wow. I wonder what that means!
Judyblue95 chapter 14 . 10/30/2014
the possibility that Carlisle feels for Bella, if true, will change the course of history, won't it? maybe he won't change Edward when he should have...oh the possibilities!
Judyblue95 chapter 13 . 10/30/2014
She was right to wonder about how she has already changed the future by having Carlisle and Edward meet before they should have...I wonder too. I'm very much enjoying reading this story, if I haven't said so already.
Judyblue95 chapter 12 . 10/30/2014
I guess that almost one hundred years of practice did improve his playing...LOL! I love how Bella was brave enough to challenge the senior Mr. Masen and also that he was gracious with his answer back!
Judyblue95 chapter 11 . 10/30/2014
her dreams are interesting to watch. they seem to be progressing...sort of. I don't know how else to describe it. her live Edward seems to possess the qualities of her vampire Edward, but with decidedly less self-control. love that Carlisle has had sex with human women!
Judyblue95 chapter 9 . 10/29/2014
oh he does like her! of course he does...the last 3 likes had me laughing loudly!
Judyblue95 chapter 8 . 10/29/2014
Lovely chapter! Alice is scaring the hell out of Bella. I still think she's trying to tell Bella not to change anything about this time so Edward still becomes a vampire.
Judyblue95 chapter 7 . 10/29/2014
I wonder...was one of Bella's purposes here to introduce Tom and Samantha? or was it just a by-product...either way...
Judyblue95 chapter 6 . 10/29/2014
i'm totally absorbed in the story. i think Alice, through Bella's dreams, is trying to warn her not to change history...
Judyblue95 chapter 5 . 10/29/2014
just wonderful. love the joke about hunting...
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