Reviews for Sacrifice
great gospel chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
A brilliant take on the situation. It was a greatly depressing, but well-executed piece. Momo's final thoughts were indeed heart-rending, but it showed her true character. Excellent job.
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
It sort of explains how Momo ended up where she did. I actually wouldn't be surprised if this is why, truthfully. However, I also think that we are being told what she thinks here, rather then getting a true picture of what she is mentally thinking. Thoughts go from one to another, typically, when one thinks. What made her go from point A to point C... B seems to be missing in a few places, but not many.
Avith chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
Okay. That's just creepy. True, very true, and well-written, but creepy. It's now offcially one of my favorite stories. Your take on Momo's mentality is really good to. All in all, this is probably one of the best stories i've read.
Nagasasu chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
A very interesting, and thoroughly depressing, take. Good work. :)