|Reviews for A Father's Thoughts|
| Rebecca Cunningham chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
No, I don't think you screw up the Destiny Island mayor. I just find this fic a bit of gladden joy, since we both know that their are little next to none fics about him and important yet minor charries (I don't think he's been written at all, personally).
I like how you portray his parental concern about Kairi and her friends as well as wondering about the future in this short, sweet fic.
| can I have a new username chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
I liked it. Good perspective for the dreaded triangle of RikuSoraKairi. The mayor's cool. A good father.
BTW, the girl's name is spelled 'Kairi' not 'Kiari'
| WishingDreamer5 chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
First of all, it's K-A-I-R-I, not Kiari!
And it's their, not thier...
I don't think it was confusing and I like the idea that you use other people to describe Kairi, Sora and Riku. That was a good idea.
Also, it's a bit too short, but it's not that bad, so nice work after all. :)