Reviews for Avatar: As Told By Neytiri |
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![]() ![]() What happens to the next chapters |
![]() ![]() Are you going to continue with this story? |
![]() ![]() That story is amazing! I never thought of the story THAT way and I'm so thankful that you retild it like that! Can you add a chapter where someone ( preferably neytiri has to pee or pees? Tnx! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good! Will there be more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story it would be great for an update soon! |
![]() ![]() update soon please i like how her story is showing you how long and how hard it was to teach him their ways! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really intriguing. I love how you put all the details into Jake's training. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLease update! |
![]() ![]() This is so cool! More! Please! I loved the movie Avatar and I get were this is going. How did you learn their language? Oh, and I'm pretty sure Neytiri's name has an A in it somewhere. Keep giong on this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story. Too bad it isn't complete. |
![]() ![]() Cool |
![]() ![]() By the way, you were saying stop that, you misspelled the Na'vi phrase, "Ftang nga". Irayo ulte Eywa ngahu (thank you and Eywa be with you). Kiyevame, kid. |
![]() ![]() This is awsome please give more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! You're SUCH a great writer! I go on my computer every day to see if you've added another chapter yet. ;P I cant wait until it's finished! I dont have any suggestions or corrections for your story(other than the occasional mispelled word, but we all get those), so you're doing great! Have fun writing! Sydney |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. :) Makes me wanna read more. Sydney |