|Reviews for An Unfortunate Mix Up|
| AvatarStark chapter 6 . 2/7
Means "good speech" in Latin.
| Ratchet Vas Alfa chapter 9 . 10/26/2013
Sorry for the lateness, but can you maybe include me as an awakened collector, the name is Ratchet Vas Harbineger Kol'Nax, he's black, with an abundant green camp here and there,and he has six eyes, 3 on each side, he's pretty tall, muscular and when he goes into ascension state he not green, he's a rare red. I would maybe like for him to be there because Shepard finds this tiny Mako hovering in space, and in it a collector pod, they open it to find him, he becomes awakened, becomes frightened, maybe fights with someone(I'll let you choose who that is) Shepard diffuses the situation, and they find out he was discovered by quarian salvage teams, but decided to leave him there, so Tali gives him the name and he becomes great friends with all the crue. Thanks a lot if you read this and I hope to see my character in the next chapters, to see if he lived up to your expectations, thanks again!
| ilego chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
When are you going to write that story the trailer is promoting?
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/18/2013
Sorry I'm late to the party but I just wanted to tell you I love the story so far. And also I thought the hitchhikers reference was nice touch.
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/8/2013
wait didn't tali say a few chapters ago, that quarian pregnancies were nine months long? now it's 5 weeks wth.
| suicidalnapkin9 chapter 5 . 7/27/2013
im pretty sure joker would have broken like 50 bones from falling :P
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/9/2013
great jobs most stuff like this (especially on this website) gets screwed up by people who can barely type and are only read for the A content. only read dis far and already hooked plus i started out in the middle originally and i STILL wanted to know what happens next. Why did the quarians evolve protectiveness though? if they're already pregnant, why do they need to be overly defensive. Idea for explanation in story: female counts on male as protection and if the male is away, the female is all by herself while weakened. Plus, not as attractive with swollen pouch. Nice marsupial reference. didn't see that coming.
| Human Bumblebee chapter 8 . 3/31/2013
HAHAHA. the illusive man has a quarian porno! LOL
| Human Bumblebee chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
Tali: I'm pregnant
Shepard: "I never seen that woman before in my life" and runs away
| Human Bumblebee chapter 3 . 3/31/2013
| Human Bumblebee chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
| artyom2013 chapter 16 . 2/22/2013
KA-BLAM! and THIS IS APPROVED BY RANGERS ALL OVER THE METROS!
| artyom2013 chapter 15 . 2/22/2013
Wait...how did thane die?
| artyom2013 chapter 8 . 2/22/2013
Bourbon: I feel a disturbance in the BITCHES...
| artyom2013 chapter 6 . 2/22/2013
EggsBenedict, my favorite dish...