Reviews for Universe
LoveDN chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Omg... that was so unbelievable hot! And at the same time so good written! Really your writing is awesome! (: And very descriptive... as I said: So hot!
I actually read it before, but I don't know why I didn't review or put it in my favorites.. but lately I remembered it and HAD to find it! So I'm happy I did! Still awesome! Just as I knew it was! (:
So, very good job!
dreaminGemini chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
beautiful! great job!
Smutluva23 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
MMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmm. That was hot. damn, now I need to change my pants.
kiiroi yumetobu chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
oh, so THAT'S how you find out the secrets to the universe. lulz. that was great, and the unexpected 'change of tactics' was very interesting too 3
Sailor Jupiter156 chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
ok a) the last line totally funny and b) great fanfic i loved every buit of it _
tartanbanana chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
okay just finished wiping up the drool

OMG you are so the reason i read fanfics like theses
loveit
now excuse me while i go and dunk my head in cold water
that was so hot
chocolat-chan chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
luv it *wipes drool off face* marty the unicorn has some words to say(my pet unicorn)
marty:if master is happy,i am happy.
Aimi-chan chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
That was super funny and hott! I loved the sex, especially cause it was on the desk that knows all. Thanks for writing this!
animeyaoigirl102 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
omg *blushes madly* i luved it. everywhere i looked the one shots were really long or really really short. and i didnt want a story. this is my 1st time reading EdxRoy and you had just what i was looking for. i really luved it. u r awesome!
Aiko of the Akatsuki chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
I can't deny how much I loved this one-shot, it was wonderfully well-written! The graphic details made this little lemon all the more pleasing...I can't say I've read a better sample of yaoi in ages, this was incredible to say the very least! And you kept Ed and Roy in character so very, very well...amazing.

I loved everything this story had to offer...the little details regarding the desk, the title, the significant ideas, the proposed future...it was amazing! This was quite a piece of work and I adored every delightful little bit. ;)

Beautiful writing.

Sexy, scandalous story.
Yukimura Hina chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
No lie, that was... tasty.

_' Sorry for the pervishness, but YAH!
Kumomi chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
CUte ]
xXxSnakebites chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
i like. :D
CocotierChat chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Wow smut(turns red for a weird remark & runs away/**)
heavensangelQ chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
yay smut! :D
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